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This was really quite fabulous. I felt like I was someone who was hearing these noises. Or, more like, I felt like I was being let in on something private and wonderful.

There was no lack of detail, even though few words were used. It was so real to me.

This story was just really, really, really phenomenal.

Wow! That's something you don't see everyday, a one-shot lemon that's also...artistic. I am really, really glad you wrote this. The eroticism is unbelievable with having to imagine exactly what it is they're doing to each other with no words to describe it. And, oh, how I love how you have Yugi so forward against Yami, who's receptive but almost shy. That purr he doesn't quite admit to doing and Yugi's laughing when he blushes. How cute! You have Yami written so wonderfully, like simply saying "I'm fine" when he's shoved against the wall. You write him much more believably than I do, I think. Let me guess, Yugi was on top again? I love that! I might make some Yugi-seme lemons, but yours come out sounding the truest, like that's how their relationship is completely and I adore it. Oh, do write another, please? I beg you!

Very nice. It leads you to use your own imagination for the imagery.

... Yugi was on top wasn't he? *smirk*

This was fascinating to read.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

This was great! I cant seem to get enough of pyzzleshipp stories! ^.^ And I got the feeling I had my ear pressed upon the door leading to the room were the two of them were at it, listening to every sound the two lovers made... Oh, I feel so naughty... but I like it! ^.~

I like it. I wish you could have posted it sooner. It would have help me with one of the chapters for To Want Love. It would have help me be able to give the feeling off with words as to letting others know and see in there mind what is going on. Anyway it was really really good.

*chuckles* That was actually really great! I'll bet that took a lot of imagination! *shakes head* Don't think I could ever do it and get it to turn out right like this one. Great job!

Hm...a very interesting concept. I think I like it. ^^ It's not something I've seen before, so it's intriguing. Nice work.