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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That story was awesome! The jokes made me laugh, and those "fantasies" were more than a little hot!
Loved it!
Loved it!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was really cute. Psychotic Yamis and all. You really do need a beta reader though.
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's the end?O_O But...don't we get to see the boys acting out those fantasies Bakura and Yami came up with with their own hikaris?! Oh, and some advice for ranty moments like that-don't put it all together like that. Seperate it into paragraphs accordingly, because otherwise it's kind of jumbled and hard to read.@_@
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good
yami was soo hot
dont know why u have such few reviews since its so funny as well as interesting
update soon
would love to see where this ends
yami was soo hot
dont know why u have such few reviews since its so funny as well as interesting
update soon
would love to see where this ends
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really funny story. Poor Hikaris all of the Yamis are insane and sex starved.
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The editor inside me was cringing because of all of the spelling/grammer mistakes... but damnit if I didn't love this story! I'll be damned if I let a few technical errors ruin my opinion of a really good story. It's hot, and funny, and really entertaining. You have a good thing going here, and I really hope you continue.