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for Love From Hell

by LadyLacrimosa

schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't going to review because... I'm lazy as hell. But I noticed the lack of reviews and I had to, I don't know how you've kept six chapters of inspiration without reviews.

I'm usually pretty anti-Ryou abuse and bail out by the second chapter, but every once in awhile I stumble onto something I can't stop reading. Like this. It's probably all the description you put in on other stuff--you know, Ryou's thought about books or the way Ryou and his dad talk/write/think about different things. I love random information like that being shoved into my head. Not that I don't like the sex stuff. Some things seem a little off to me, but over all, I'm loving it. Usually such things being done to Ryou make me back out, and I'm not sure why I haven't yet, but I'm clinging to this story for all it's worth. Maybe it's because I could see Bakura doing all of it...

I'm pretty bad at constructive reviews, but hopefully you won't mind me coming around every chapter or two and showering you with praise. It's about the only way this lazy reviewer can think of to get her point across.
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....wait so where does the love come in?
J-chan