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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOhhhhhh..... This is so sad!!!!!!! I can't wait till the next chapter!
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November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good I hope that you contuine this story
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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg please hurry this is good
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you updated. I thought you didn't want to finish it. Thanks for the amazing chapter. I love your Bakura. He is so raw and kinky and wild and everything that Bakura really is.Can't wait to read more.
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD thank you 4 updating!!!
I'm always waiting for the next chapters!
I'm always waiting for the next chapters!
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really good, poor Ryou always getting abused.
Can't wait to see what happens when his dad gets home! Update soon <3
Can't wait to see what happens when his dad gets home! Update soon <3
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My GOOOOOOOOOOOD
I started reading the first chapter today and finished the last one in 3 hours. Bakura and Ryou is not my favorite couples but god i love sarcasm. I'm tired of all those fictions with a soft and stupid Bakura. This is exactly how i love Bakura to be. God I love this fic. PLZ continue
I started reading the first chapter today and finished the last one in 3 hours. Bakura and Ryou is not my favorite couples but god i love sarcasm. I'm tired of all those fictions with a soft and stupid Bakura. This is exactly how i love Bakura to be. God I love this fic. PLZ continue
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that...was...amazing!!! it's so dark and sadistic, please keep it up, heck i am getting into the torture thing *she laughs*
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm a big fan of this particular fiction, and I never bothered to get an account on here. But when I read you didn't tihnk you really had any readers, I decided to prove you wrong. I'm a reader, and I have to say, I really am a fan of this story.
It seemed to me that Bakura was a little OOC in the last chapter, but thats understandable. Writers block and all that jazz. Keep up the great work though! I look forward to your new chapter!
It seemed to me that Bakura was a little OOC in the last chapter, but thats understandable. Writers block and all that jazz. Keep up the great work though! I look forward to your new chapter!
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i actually really like your story. i think that it's very well written and you use very perfect english. However, sometimes, it's a little too perfect for me and i'd wish that the story was a little more formal. i like the way you weave out the characters and i like the way you show us what's in ryou's head through your first person narritive. sometimes it's annoying though, like in the first chapter when ryou talks about japanese food and i think in the seond chapter when he gave us a history lesson on egypt. it was very infomative and it showed how much ryou liked these things but i felt as if it made me stray from the story. besides all of that, i really liked the story and i can't wait for your next update. i really want to see what happenes to ryou.
Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
jeda
Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
jeda