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for Immortal Love

by AxiaDrake

person prima
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter...

more interaction between the Atem/Yugi, and Bakura/Ryou
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!

I love Yugi in this story. He is really good that way.

As for Seto and Jou...they are so hot together. Poor Seto^^ he is trying to take things slowly but Jou is not making things easier for him. Jou is really too naive. Maybe he will mature for being in contact with Seto but I think that anyway he is sweet that way.

OK then update!
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. If more parents told their kids about sex maybe there wouldn't be so many unwanted pregnancies and STD. Oh well, you are right they don't. I hope Seto will be gentle with him. They are such cute couples. I can just imagine Atemu with long floor lenght hair.
person Celeste
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... you might have something there... I didn't even realize I hated Seto.

Jeolousy probably. He gets such a loving puppy, and doesn't really appreciate him.

Nah, can't hate Seto, he is too hot and sexy.

And I love Seto X Jou stories too much.

Anyway, I love this chapter. The lights finally meet their yamis. Thank you for the update. ^____^
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You TEASE! How dare you leave off there?! It's mean! give us the smexy! we wants it NOW!
person smalvina
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the part when Jou calling Yugi father was great
person Arielle Stott
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. It is so interesting how you've changed around the personalities of everyone. Yugi seems to be the harsh one this time instead of Bakura. I like. Please update soon? And is there any way that you could send me an e-mail of when you update? my e-mail is death_by_senbon @earthlink.net. Thank you.
person Aots
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw poor Jou. I started getting teary there. God I'm a sap >o< Please update so I can get rid of the heart-wrenching image of Jou's crying eyes out of my head...
person Celeste
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ow, Seto really messed this up with his cynism. >___< Yes, make him suffer, wahaha. Poor baby Jou. Make evil Seto suffer.
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact that Seto wants to go slowly with Jou and get to know him more before they become lovers . This is really understandable and that will give more value to their relation. And Jou should understand that...^^'(Even though that will make Jou completly crazy but this is the funny part...^^)

Anyway, this is very interesting!
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