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by YamiKuro

person Anon
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
XD Well.... That was...different.
I just read a fic where Baku called his 'lover' Master and it freaked me out. Yet in here it, to Ryou, it's quite hot.
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I love when Ryou is in control.
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice end. Bakura is so sweet when he is submissive.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh, that's hilarious! I loved it! Thank You so much for writing it!
person Calcifer
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drool* Seme-Ryou is always hot to read.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
short and yummy! almost poetic!
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wowww. That was really differnt but I liked it! ^.^
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i want to let u kno that i luv you immensily already and i barely know you. :) your writing is very nice, some how i've read most of the stories you've recommended...more than once (next to nothing is the best) and we r BOTH IN THE CLASS OF 2008 YAAAAAY!!! (it's about danm time). i liked this one shot. it was so dark and...sexy. i lov anything thats bakura/ryou or, in this case, ryou/bakura so this was really good. i also really liked the fact that you made ryou the seme in the relationship. nice job.