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for "Yes, Master"

by sweetciel

schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wicked little fic! Don't know the series well, but enough to enjoy your wild/kinky turn with it.

(And also wanted to thank you for your reviews! I promise to finish Finding Daddy soon!)
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy --- dear GODS that was hot! Incredibly, wonderfully, blissfully hot! Gah! SOOO HOT! First shot at fanfic OR Yaoi? Are you sure? O_O that was awesome! I loved it!



I originally came by this way to thank you for reviewing my story, and to give you the link to the story that inspired it. Who knew that I'd be walking away with a such nice treat? ^_^ Thank you so much!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3484954/1/The_Marriage_Stone
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was soooooooo delicious. :) i can't imagine what yugi would do if yami had done something more than just look at kaiba's butt--yikes! lol and i can't believe that was your first attempt at yaoi AND fanfiction. you are a natural!
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You reviewed my story The Prodigy and asked if I wanted a beta and I would love for you to beta my story. I being asked by several people but no one leaves their addy for me to get a hold of them. So if you want to do it, let me know and we can get this started. Thank you so much.

Kitty
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.o~ thats awesome ^-^
J-chan
person YamiKuro
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...o.o

Amazing. Absofreakinfantastic.....

LOOOOOOOVE IT!!
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this was freakin HOT!! I loved it. even though it was outside the naruto fandom. gods.. you have to write a Naruto story!! *grabs a hold of Annieme and shakes desperatly* please...and, haha.. i was reading this while listening to zeromancer. and the lyrics was just so perfect when I found out that Yami and Yugi looks like twins.. (are they??) "doppelganger I love you,my pain is your pain, your pains are my pains, your chains are my chains, too." >_< whahaa!
anyways.. loved it!
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first fanfic or not that was fuckin HOT! I mean DAAAAAAAAAAAAMN! It takes a LOT to get me hot and bothered but you definitely pulled it off!
person RayeMoon
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O Wow! I'm sorry I didn't get to be the first to review this, I was gone all day. But, wow! My gosh, when you write a lemon, you write a lemon! Yugi is a tad over-jealous (smiling at a waiter!) and Yami a tad over-submissive (sobbing!), but in this story, that works! So in sync with the rest. This was amazingly hot, a little unnerving, and so, so good. -Fans self- A spanking, self-preparing, and rough and cruel sex! Annieme, I love it. Yugi makes one harsh master. And I liked the little things, like Yami's soulroom being sealed after he decided to stay with Yugi. And boy does Yami like the abuse. And Yugi likes abusing. Hot and sadistic. What more can I say? Fantastic first story, fantastic present, just fantastic! Maybe someday you could try a sequel after Yugi catches Yami doing something stupid again. Or, I'd bet you'd be good at pride-shipping, too. But only if and when you want to, don't strain yourself! It can be really hard to think up that next SL, believe me. Thank you very much for this story, Annie-chan. Jaa!
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Keep that up and you're on your way to writing as well as the author you've dedicated this too. Good Luck!