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for Eighteen

by MishikoShinsei

person Calcifer
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, that's so miserable... they're so madly in love, but afraid to go talk to the other and fix it... I hope you decide to write another sequel.

Keep up th good work!

~Angel
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto and poor Yami. They miss each other horribly. I hope something changes and they get back together. I love it.
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally sat down and read the series. Very well done and looking forward to the others
person RayeMoon
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Poor Yami, poor Seto. Damn you, Gozaburo for striking Seto. Die! Seto's really taking it hard, calling all his appointments, wearing the same suit three days in a row. And Yami, going solo to the memory of his lover, that's sweet and sad. I'm glad you continued this, Mishiko, and I'm glad you've been keeping reading my story. I hope Nineteen comes out soon, they get back together, and screw each other unconscious. But don't rush it. I'm sorry I haven't been reading Souvenir, I just can't deal with incest or child rape. But this series is great! Maybe Yami should dance for Seto again. Hee! Keep up the good work and thanks for continuing. Jaa!
person barrie18
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really getting to hate you. So much mush, so much anguish. Here is another story, I'm going to be hanging on, waiting to see what happens next.