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This is simply an amazing story, and chapter 4 still makes me want to bawl! It's such a heart wrenching story, because it is so true. Living in Toronto I knew a few homeless kids and it always saddened me. There was even one that unlike some, didn't do drugs or drink. He was my friend, and was lucky enough that one of the internet cafe's let him stay there provided he helped clean the place. Then the patrons would pay him for items from Diablo2 and he would be there all the time. They were kind enough to even let him sleep in one the terminals. Each day I went, I would make sure that I brought him dinner, when I was buying mine, and there wasn't a weekend that I didn't make sure that his weekend was paid for as well. I still remember him 6 years later and I am glad that I was able to do this for him.

Poor Seto. I hope he can get in touch with Mokuba. Too bad the media had to interfere with his thoughts. I hope they can figure this whole mess out. Seto needs to find a job of some kind to boost his selfesteem. Great chapter.

I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.

Brilliant fic, I really like the original storyline. Keep up the great work and please post soon.

Poor Seto. He is so suspicious, not that I blame him. Yami is truly a nice guy just trying to help. I hope Seto gives him a chance.

I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.

I love this story. I am glad you are continuing it. Poor Seto not at all the life he leads in the story. I hope he will stay with Yami and let him help him. Great work.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

Very dark my dear, but somehow I can see something like that happening. He was created to be a truly evil man