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for This Is My Chance

by nikki7716

schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww poor Ryuuji! but things will get better
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWW *_* That kiss was so sweet..I'm not sure I've ever liked Duke this much He is so nice in this fiction....
ThAt no good lucky bastard Tristan better go after him and make this right...
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pretty cool
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww. You sick? Here lemme give u a hug to make u feel better *hugs*

Poor Duke. Tristan's head reli is made of cheese. Why can't HE say something to make Duke feel better? Idiot! Get over Joey and date him already! He's the guy for you!

This is the exact situation when I confessed to the guy who already had his gf. He was like "Uh, hey, I'm flattered, but...you do know I'm taken...right?" and didn't even have the courtesy to hug me and make me feel better as I was crying like a baby. Gah! If I wasn't engaged, I'd be crying right now of heartbreak!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nikki,

I've really enjoyed this series of stories. It's actually quite difficult to tell what is essentially the same story from separate points of view and you're doing a very good job!

Also, I like that you've chosen to do this last one from Otogi's point of view. Quite unexpected.

Thanks for sharing. I eagerly await the next chapter.

'Ko
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh Duke just tell him already....He should have just pulled him in one of the stalls and had his way with him...That Tristan...what an idiot!! he can't see whats right in front of his face? no wonder ..his brain is made of cheese! But damn the last part was too cute..Tristan crying, saying he loves Duke and duke getting all happy and cheerful...I can't wait to see who jumps on the other first?.......Tristan must've meant something by that I love you! and Duke might just lose it next time Tristan throws himself on him..Now witch is it?......as Shuichi of Gravitation always said: and my crazy dream continues...I wished I could wake up in the middle of it ^_^
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well its good, so yes you get cookies...and chocolate bunnies...the good ones...hmmm Lindor Chocolate Bunnies....*drool*
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Now that is what I call cavity-inducing sweetness! X3
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no I didn't meant it like that... I really love every bit of all your stories. Lately It's the only thing I read online....Especially this last chapter..You describe emotions that everyone can relate to....Now that I think about it This 'Tristan' is the same guy i wanted to kill in your last story .Now I feel sorry for him..It's like when you see one thing from one side you do all the wrong judgments...(Now class we're learning life lessons here...Always here the story from all sides!!!!!).....'_'Your amazing when you write like that...
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha! Duke actually got his due so far. But I may sound evil when I say Duke should've just snog him there and then, making use of Tristan's vulnerability, but then again, it wouldn't be ethical...

Neways, hurry up and continue! Gimme more and more and more... *rambles on and on*