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for Endless dream

by YamiKitsune

person tavia454
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhhh! *bashes Keith over the head with a large blunt object* I hate that evil rotten good for nothing bastard!!! If he so much as harms one hair on the top of Yugi's head...I'll get him yet. *mutters to self* I'll kill that bastard yet! Great chap!
person catti
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YamiKitsune-san, Isnt this the week that Tavi-san is in Florida?...(Im the Catti that is cowriting Angel of Mine and havent heard from her in about a week)...anyway...wanted to say...scary!!! EWWW...Keith as a step-brother, YUCK!!!...Catti
person MewMew2
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story premise. I eagerly await your next update to see where this fic goes.....
person Shuman
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Evil evil evil Keith! Die!!

Thanx for the update!!
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And an interesting plot line it is. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Thanks for the update. Later.
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Yugi. I wonder if Keith was with Yami because of Yugi, in might have been subconcsious. I hope they can keep him safe.
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope he continues to help Yuugi and Grandpa can keep custody of him.
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Watch your spelling and proof read because you missed words.
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I do hope you continue it. And try not to take to long, or 'some people', like me, might forget why I like it. Looking forward to that next chapter. Can't wait to see how your gonna have Yami and Yugi come together. Later.
person catti
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...interesting...I like it...I like how Yami is portraited....Catti

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