rate_review Reviews

Well done. Can't wait to see what you've got in store for us. Please let us know soon. Thanks.

Love your writing, hate your villains.....guess thats the point though.
J-chan

I hope Yugi changes his mind and at least tells Yami. They could catch Keith and get Yugi out of his way. Poor malik.

Evil Keith!! Die!!!

Thanks, for another "very" enjoyable chapter. Glad Yami and Yugi are starting to get together. I'm really looking forward to see what else in store (in form of abuse/bashing)for our (favorite/unfavorite) characters. Can't wait to see the outcome of Yami and Yugi's game. I hope it will be soon. I really am getting into this fic. It surprised me how happy a new could make me. C ya.

Good chapter. Keith is following Yugi around. That's not good, especially since he has so amny of Yugi's family fooled. He also has free access to Yugi. I hope Yugi can stay out of his way.

I'll try and get on that chapter tomorrow (if work lets me do anything other tha, ugh, work) *sighs* Just wanted to drop a review before I go and pass out for the night. Counting down - 9 days till Disney!!! Yay! I'm so tired I could drop before that day ever comes. And on the 8th of April just look for a short woman with black hair and a rather large white...I mean blonde streak in it - in the company of a preteen mini-me and a blonde husband with another preteen mini-him. *snickers* I'll see if I can get my boy to pull his hair up in the red tips that he used to do, but I can't count on it. Loving this story!!! C'ya

This one is just as good. Nice usage of foreshadowing, it really gives the fic a novel like feel. Please update when convenient, you've done an excellent job so far.

Is that a yamixyugi story?? plz tell me It is!!!!(and plz kill keith)

*blinks* Holy hell - I made it onto AFF?! Wow, I forgot what it looked like...anyways, I'm already hooked on this story! It's cool as hell to watch your writing style as it progresses! This one looks to be a really good read - your others were as well - but this one just has that feel to it. Please continue - its awesome!!