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Oh, gods, is this getting warped! Oh, poor Yugi! Gods, Tavi, you make me cry. Poor Yugi! I can't hardly continue reading every time he calls Atemu master. And the scenes of memories, gods, they're so horrible. Makes you really appreciate your own life, where that stuff doesn't happen to you. And Atemu, how it must be to know your precious light thinks you're nothing but a raping, beating bastard and so far gone that he not only expects it but almost wants it! This story is so good, but so very dark. I do hope there's some light coming. Not that there hasn't been some already. Yugi is safe and home now, though I about fainted when Dr. Johanssen took him home. It's it scary how that stuff happens? How no one thinks to question an 'authority' figure? Where were the guards?
Your punishment scene made my stomach churn, but at the same time I was thinking, yes! How wonderfully, horribly great. Exactly what he deserved, to have to skin his own penis that way. Poetic justice is there ever was one. I hope every single mother-effer in this story that hurt Yugi or tried to hurt Yugi goes down in the same bleeding, screaming way.
Dr. Moran, did I miss something? Where did he come from? I'm sorry, I've read every chapter, but he just seemed to appear. If he's as bad as I think he is, I hope he dies, too. But the person I hope dies most is the brother from Ch. 5 that left Yugi to die. He's even worse than the first master. Oh, and the kidnappers. Everyone! Let them all die screaming, please, Tavi.
Now that the bloodlust is out of the way, oh, I hope Yugi gets better soon. At least enough to know that Atemu is NOT his master and is in no way related to those asses of before. I just want to cry when Yugi begs him for rape. He's so mixed up inside that he thinks he wants it, deserves it. This story is unrelenting in its heart-jerking darkness. But don't think I'm critizing it. It's exactly what it's been made out to be. Dark, bone-chilling, stomach-churning. And yet, you've set it up so beautifully for the light at the end of the tunnel, no pun intended. It's wonderful, Tavi. I hope you continue it (as I know you will). Jaa!
P.S. Maybe a happy one-shot, to ease the tension? :-) Just because I'm a little worried about you, what with your father's death (and your friend's). I hope you're doing better, I really do. You asked me once if people get over it. Unfortunately as well as fortunately, they do. They must. And doing so is in no way a betrayal of your father (and friend). Remember, I'm sure he would have wanted you to get better. I think it might be too late, and I'm going to warn you in advance in case you don't think you'll be able to handle the bittersweetness, but I'm posting a non-sexual one-shot for you to read, whenever you think you want to. I hope I do this right and it helps. Jaa, again.

So that's why Yugi never spoke. Also, it's kinda depressing how Yugi can't seem to grasp the fact that he neither has no needs a master. His mind is really screwed up. I hope he gets better. Update soon!

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

That is exactly what should happen to those who prey on the "weaker" or "innocent" of our society. Can't wait to see what you have in store for the rest of them. Hope Atemu and Yugi can find their way to each other. All in all it's another great chapter. I really am looking forward to the next one. Thanks for writing. Later.

Damn straight rapists deserve to be ripped apart by the shadows and made to beg 'till they wet themselves. Those people are the worst types of humans- so glad you dealt with him accordingly. I hope the same thing will happen to the others that hurt Yuugi. *Hugs plushie* Don't cry Yuugi-chan!!! >_<

Poor Yuugi has suffered a lot more than anyone should. I don't think that idiot rapist/pedophile suffered nearly enough. I hope the rest of them do. Yuugi needs a lot of help, I hope Atemu is up to it. Great work.

That bastard deserved every bit of what came to him. I was mesmerized by this chapter, and I'm really glad Yugi is finally home. Now the process of regaining his former memories can begin. Can't wait for the next update!

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! *Happy dance* Thank the GODS that man died a slow and very painful death! Only they should have tried torturing some information out of him first, then they could have gone straight to the source... but hunting them down one by one will be quite fun too, really make the others sweat as their numbers decrease and they don't know who's doing it or who will die next, probably even turn on each other trying to find someone, ANYONE to blame since the Yami's are the only witnesses. Yugi might even be able to point out a place or two where he was held. Oooh this story is soooooo good and you gave us such a nice long chapter this time thank you thank you thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed your trip! I can't WAIT for the next one!

Such sweet...sweet revenge...made my day!

oh, my, god!..............................
I DEMAND MORE!!!!!!!!!!! science I started reading this I couldn't stop till I finished what was written if you leave me hanging I'm not responsible for what I do!

Yup! Another great chapter. A great pleasure to read. Love it. Thankies!!!!!!!