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I Love, Love, Love It!!!!!
PLEASE Continue!!!!!!!!

Great chapter ^-^
J-chan

Poor Yugi. Those memories are really making it hard. I hope haveing Atemu there to reassure him and no punishments for accidents will help him to unlearn all those stupid lessons. I'm glad he is keeping himself under control. Yugi is not ready for that even when it is with love.

Yami, you are WORLDS stronger than I could EVER to be able to resist temptation THAT strong... I'm sorry, mostly nude Yugi draping his naked ass over my lap to be spanked...dear gods you have a will of Steel!


Thank you thank you thank you for lovely updates and lovely mental images! I adored this chapter!

only one word can describe this story:
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
and only one word can describe it's author:
K-I-L-L-E-R

Still an amazing story, and always look forward to your fare...

Aw. That scene with the glass must have been distressing for Atemu. But he really was happy when Yugi ate. You did a really good job with this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next update.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

Aw, slowly but surely normalcy is beginning to return. I really hope Yugi can regain his lost memories and all his brainwashed actions will disappear. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I am so glad that everything is getting happy again. I am seriously loving the story. I make sure to check every Sunday morning for the new stuff, and sit down with my coffee and read it. Great work!

I am really looking forward to your next chapter,

Kaze

Poor Atemu. He just doesn't get a break, does he? Yugi crawling in his lap, just begging for it, that's just horrible. I really hope Yugi gets better. It's coming, you can see it, in the way he's starting to believe in Atemu when he says he can do things without fearing punishment. And that Yugi is starting to remember, like remembering he loves pancakes. I wonder why the guy in the italics flashback always calls him Hikari. Is this just a figment of Yugi's torn-apart mind and it didn't really happen that way? And a senator! Bastard. I hope this whole house or whatever it is just gets destroyed and every patron is shredded.
Tavi, I'm really glad you enjoyed that little story. I was really debating whether I should put it up, then I thought maybe you would like it. I'm glad you did. Of course you can print it and show it to them if you want, it's yours, and if you don't think the fact that it's yaoi is going to bother them. As for your motorbike, that sounds awesome. Of course you can send me a picture, I would love to see it.
I understand if you don't think you can write more, when things go south, it's always hard to muster up fluffiness, isn't it? I've had some bad things happen to me lately, and it makes it hard to write, and my problems aren't half what yours are. I just suggested it because it might be good to attempt making some light- instead of dark-themed stories (pun intended). But only if you want to.
Keep up this story, please. It's sometimes hard to read for the knowledge that things like this happen to poor children, but it's also gratifying in the healing of Yugi and the destruction of the horrible bastards that hurt him and the others. I foresee it being very long and a very long time before anything even as small as a kiss happens between Atemu and Yugi, but that's fine. I shall read every chapter. I'm just sorry I haven't had the time to catch up on FtS. Jaa!