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Amazing lemon...so hot

Really hot chapter. Things are really heating up both with Yami and Yugi and with the revenge. I hope they find out what they need to know before sending those scumbags to the Shadows. Great chapter.

(O_O) Oh...my god. Awesome.

Wow I can't believe you pulled it off! (I should have known) The way you managed to turn what was a nasty trick played by two creeps into something that would help Yami show Yugi how things should be done, even to the point of offering himself to Yugi so as not to hurt the boy by taking him again. Also the humour that followed between Bakura and Ryou after they had broken into the room was great I loved it!
Now let's hope Yami and Bakura can get some answers in the most painful way possible...

Hahaha! That was awesome! I couldn't stop laughing after Bakura yelled at them to 'tone it down'!
*Wipes tears from eyes* Anyway, sorry I haven't been commenting. I haven't been on in awhile. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

*drool* lemony goodness...

Heh. I'd love to see what you're gonna cook up as vengeance on those two guys in the apartment. I very much look forward to the next chapter!

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

Read it there (ff.net). Read it here. Loved it (chapter) both times. Nice work "ladies". C ya!!! tinkletimekelly

Hi, tavi. Thanks for your review on my story. I'm glad to be back. I've caught up with your story. I'm really, really glad that Yugi is home, his memories intact, safe if not sound. Or, at least, somewhat safe. Oh, please, don't have him raped again. Poor Yugi, he's just now starting to return to normal after everything that happened to him. And poor Atemu, having Yugi being so sexy around him, so attempting to seduce him because he's been trained that way. And now he finds Yugi kneeling on his bed, pleasuring himself. I do hope he didn't leave. And something tells he that he didn't, considering that you ended the chapter there. At least let them have some erotic experience together, even if they don't have actual intercourse. And I'm a little confused on the bit with the drug. Unless--and I think you mentioned this somewhere--that the two freaks are there watching, somehow. Why else would they have bothered spiking the spiky-haireds if they weren't going to watch the action?
Oh, oh, please have all of these bastards just die in pieces. Please? Jaa!

I am! I am! I'd LOVE some fluff! although Yami fingering Yugi until he comes would be billions of awesome, I don't think that's quite what you have in mind... Either way I HOPE you update soon, you have no idea how much I love this story and how badly I can't WAIT to see those two die... you know they boys are gonna have to be careful, all these dead bodies popping up and their only connection is Yugi... it's bound to raise some suspicions...

Such a teaser...and good update