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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....**blink**wait...what?!? EVIL! thats a mean cliff hanger T-T......X3 hehe you rock!
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I really love this story. Too bad Marik, Bakura and Atem are not available for the torture of all pedophiles. I can't wait until they get the big boss and free the other kids. Their anger will know no bounds. I'm glad his friends are there for them and so supportive.
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!!! Cliffhanger! Aaaahhhh!
I kept checking repeatedly everyday, and was overjoyed to find an update this time. ^^ I was so lookig forward to Atemu's vengeance, but at least we got to see a taste of what's up coming. Heh. Marik had his fun. And the psychological torture of seeing just what they did to that doctor was truly inspired. I can't wait to see what you guys come up with next.
Once again, a superior chapter. I really look forward to what you come up with next.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
I kept checking repeatedly everyday, and was overjoyed to find an update this time. ^^ I was so lookig forward to Atemu's vengeance, but at least we got to see a taste of what's up coming. Heh. Marik had his fun. And the psychological torture of seeing just what they did to that doctor was truly inspired. I can't wait to see what you guys come up with next.
Once again, a superior chapter. I really look forward to what you come up with next.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing in it's grotesqueness...the chapter really hits home that the three darks are a force to be reckoned with and NOT to be messed with
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please... PLEASE POST!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW THE END!!!!!!
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for next chapter!
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, but I have to admit I sort of skimmed through the torture bit. Especially after the ATM thing...bad mental images...
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh I know WHAT was I thinking ^___^ *bows down to your superior story telling*
The scene downstairs with Mokuba, Seto and Joey was priceless the thing is I can actually picture Mokuba doing that! I liked the little bit of humour before the nasty stuff.
I think that now Bakura and Atemu know there are other victims it's gonna get messy and a 'nasty' Yugi nope can't imagine it but seriously I don't blame him in the least...
It was also heartwarming to see Joey putting Yugi at ease with bringing him up to date just the sort of thing I think he'd do.
As for the scenes in the apartment...EWWW THAT was nasty! and talk about descriptive *shudder* It's gonna give me nightmares (it's 1.25am here). But still they deserve everything they get, more of the same please...
The scene downstairs with Mokuba, Seto and Joey was priceless the thing is I can actually picture Mokuba doing that! I liked the little bit of humour before the nasty stuff.
I think that now Bakura and Atemu know there are other victims it's gonna get messy and a 'nasty' Yugi nope can't imagine it but seriously I don't blame him in the least...
It was also heartwarming to see Joey putting Yugi at ease with bringing him up to date just the sort of thing I think he'd do.
As for the scenes in the apartment...EWWW THAT was nasty! and talk about descriptive *shudder* It's gonna give me nightmares (it's 1.25am here). But still they deserve everything they get, more of the same please...
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot! Wow! I'm so sorry that it had to happen this way, the two of them being forced into it, but was it ever hot. I'm so glad that they two of them got to finally have sex and that Yugi realized it doesn't always have to be about pain and dominance. Aw, Atemu offering himself to Yugi to prove that he is not a toy and that he can be on top, too. That was really nice. Poor Yugi having to get fucked raw because the drug doesn't want to wear off. Was Atemu's time on his back the only one and the drug is now worn off? I guess it would have to be, you can't have them in bed for the rest of the story. This is so hot and I hope that they aren't plagued with too much more angst before the final revenge and some more lemony goodness. Love this story, tavi.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW that chapter was absolutely Beautiful! so much pretty loving, so much sexy and you even had Yugi on top! hooray! I can't WAIT to see what they do to the two they catch, although they are going to have to starts being sneaky, maybe using the shadow realm to dispose of the bodies, because lots of people dying (whether they are scum or not) tends to get noticed by local authority figures...