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for Angel of Mine

by tavia454

person Snickerdoodle
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KJFU&*#^RYHFRI!!! I'm sooooo happy with the update! I've been checking everyday and today was my lucky day! I loved it, and OMG I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT OUR TRIO HAS IN STORE FOR ALL THOSE LOW LIVES!!! I can't adequately express how much i love you right now! Please update soon!
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shoving the creeps 'you know what' into his mouth was definitely a stroke of genius. Good update, though when you switched scenes it did leave me thinking, "Did I miss something?"
person kate
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update.... This story/chapter is really good.... Yes he is finally getting what he deserves....
plz update soon, ne...!!! ^_^
person EternalDragon
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is good, but in chpt 14, that ball ripping scene was really contrary and counter productive to your point of having to keep that guy alive for whatever plan those Yami's have. How exactly is someone whos bleeding profusely from having an organ ripped out going to live?
person siana
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh this just keeps on getting better and better, but what I want to know is how the hell do you manage to keep the humour when they are torturing someone? It beats the hell outta me…
The thought of Yami in a thong all tied up…ooh the imagination just runs wild *snicker* (slaps wrist) And that last part, remind me never to cross you and catti, you two are evil, good ain’t it…*grins* more of the same please.
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I am glad Atemu did that. Bakura and Marik were having way too much fun at Atemu's expense. I hope those other kids and that little lady will be okay. I hope Yugi will be alright with going back to that place.
person CandyCaneLane
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!! I AM SO LOVING THIS!!! I check everyday to see if there's been an update! I WILL DIE IF THERE ISN'T MOAR! <3 i-i love you hardcore.
person snickerdoodle
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't even know what to say. I haven't been on AFF in so long and i had a sudden wave of nostalgia and really wanted to read some YGO fics. I used to come here all the time to read and i found this gem! Literally stayed up all night and read from beginning to chapter 13. I'm in love! It's written so well! PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS! I can't wait for more!!!!!!
person Diayma
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good! There's something about Yami, Marik, and Bakura getting revenge on the same person that is imminently satisfying. Can't wait for more!
person Crazy Physco from funny farm
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
THIS IS THE FIRST FANCFIC THAT I HAVE GOTTEN HOOKED ON!!!
AND I MEAN HOOKED!!!
I HAVE A FISH HOOK IN MY SIDE!!!!
THAT IS HOW HOOKED I AM ON IT!!!