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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^-^ thanks I was having a bad night...still am but hopefully it will work out great chapter is that the end though? whats the present?!!
J-chan
J-chan
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful and amazing ending to a great story. Have fun on Hiatus and see you in a month.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic... LOVE THIS.... ^_^
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed it.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was...wow it was a great ending to a wonderful story. The emotion felt by everyone was well written and I'm glad Yugi was able to help in the end I really think he needed it. Although I was surprised that the leader of the Yukaza didn't know what was going on I thought they kept a tighter reign...Also the reunion between Solomon and Yugi was absolutely Wonderful!
Okay now this is so NOT cool, I want to know What did Yami get Yugi? You have to tell me or i'm gonna go crazy!
Okay now this is so NOT cool, I want to know What did Yami get Yugi? You have to tell me or i'm gonna go crazy!
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh em gee. Please tell me that you're going to finish this~! I thought it was going to be stupid at first (no offense, but angsty stories usually ARE dumb) but then I was like, "This is AMAZING." I love how you two portray the characters. I love how there are bits of humor sprinkled in with everything. The sex scene/s between Yami and Yugi was/were fantastic, by the way. Good job. Also: This is my first review to any authors on this site, so feel special! Keep up the good work, please! <33333
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOPS! I read this at 1:00am on the 24th. I swear I thought I commented. S'pecially about the part were Atemu ripped off a guys balls and stuffed them in the guys mouth while said guy was screaming in pain. Then above all, left the entire mess for Bakura and Marik to clean up. NICE! Must of erased it, when head hit keyboard in sleep. Can't wait to see what you have in store next.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I almost laughed out loud when the guy saw Atemu in The Room. I knew right away it was part of their vengeance. *smirk* that guy definitely deserves what's coming to him.
It was pretty mean (and funny) the way Bakura and Marik decided that Atemu would be the bait without consulting him first. XD
Very much looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
It was pretty mean (and funny) the way Bakura and Marik decided that Atemu would be the bait without consulting him first. XD
Very much looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I MISSED a chapter?! how the HELL did I miss a chapter?! I've been reading religiously! but hey, means I get to read two today! Ok this once was incredible! I mean, super scary WHOA incredible. A single angry yami is a terrifying image all on its own, but to have 3 of them in a super deluxe pissed off frame of mind... *shudder* I would pity those two if they weren't bastards who deserved every second of this. now off to the next chapter!
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES YES YEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!! Woohooo! Go Yami! Best desecration of a pervert EVER! Thank you GODS! I am SOOO happy they are finally getting some blasted payback on these assholes! I hope you update this soon it's such a great sotry, i love every single second of it!