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Hey it's another 'going to be a story' from the pen of Tavi.

I'm glad your not giving up on fts I'm enjoying that immensely...I know I haven't reviewed it yet but I will I promise.

as for Yamiyugi...Here's a challenge for you...Instead of trashing other peoples stories why don't you try and write an 'original story' yourself, you will find it's not that easy, and I doubt you will find anything original to write, I think everythings been covered...
Take my advice, if you don't like a story do what I do, keep my mouth shut and don't read any more, see it's simple.

you bet your ass i'm ganna review this!!! ^-^ I didn't see who the author was until I finished reading! I LOVE IT! ^-^ hehehe. Yugi torture. Just as good as Malik or Ryou torture~!

What the heck is with you? For a Yami and Yugi fan you bloody well love to torture them!!! Gods does everyone on this site fantasize about rape, sick cults and kidnapping? If so, I don't know what the fuck I'm doing here, it's getting beyond a joke. Do you know how many stories I have read where and this is so cliche, Yami and Yugi are in love with each other but too afraid to say anything, Yami stays because of Yugi, they start to get close only for someone to either kidnap/rape Yugi, Yugi then gets returned and he's not an innocent Hikari anymore, the light is gone from his soul, he and Yami admit their feelings but they can't do anything because Yugi is too broken, they can't make love. This is so cliche and so pathetic, for gods sake will someone please write something original, you know think up an original storyline.

Nice story... I hope Atemu will find Yugi in time!!
Please continue!??

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ! A new fic. Can't wait for more. Later