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WHOO!! UPDATES!!! and yet again you leave me in this pit of despair with Atemu!!

Hi! I only got through one chapter--my, was it long, it took me twenty minutes to read!--and I dont' have time to read the second right now, but I will stick on this story, I promise. I don't know who wrote what, which is good, because I can say with complete honesty that you both wrote this story fantastically well. Great dialogue, great settings, and the conflicts! Poor Atemu, sick like a dog and having to go out into the rain, thinking of nothing but finding Yugi, and poor Yugi times a hundred, since you can guess what's going to happen to the guy. Ooh, cruelty! I'm sorry to hear that you're not reading much anymore, tavi, though I understand. So few authors of talent anymore. I really like this and please continue it, both of you. I'm sorry I haven't read Fleeing the Shadows all of the way. I've read most chapters and skimmed the rest, so I know what's happening, I just need to find the time to sit down and read the whole thing line by line. It's so fast-paced and filled with tension. Gah, I'm reviewing both stories. I'll make sure I put a review on the other where it belongs. Please, continue this story whenever you get the chance, it's lovely. I credit both of you. (I'll check Catti's page to see if she has any stories. At the moment I can't think if I've looked before.)Beautiful!

This is just so sad. I hope Atem will be okay. Bakura and Marik are starting to understand him a little better now. I hope that will change how they feel. Seto is learning an important lesson. Friends and family are always more important than money and power. It was so nice of them to come over to help them with Christmas even though Yugi is not there.
Good chapter.

awesome cant wait till next chappie

I love it. Poor Yami and Yugi, just as they were realising that they loved each other. Well, Yami was realising that Yugi loved him. I hope they can get him back.
Sorry for the late review. My first day off on working eleven in a row. Sixty hours a week doesn't leave much time for anything. Darn RL getting in the way. Great story.

Aww I just had to do it didn't I? I must be turning into the world's biggest sap!!! I shed a couple of tears during this chappie...the interaction between Atemu,Bakura and Marik was so well written and to add the doubt for the reason they hated him just made it. I loved the talk between the old man and Mokuba.
I hope they find Yugi soon, I know this is supposed to be 'dark' but please don't torture the poor boy too much...

Okay, I'll admit, you had me in tears during this chapter. A feat that hasn't been accomplished in a long time. What got me hardest was the scene in the bedroom Yami sitting by the window, Yami, as sick as he was, trying to go out, Yami admitting his fear that Yugi wasn't coming home, losing hope. The chapter was so sad. Christmas, worst time of the year for families with resent "losts".

Just for refrence I hate you! Which oddly is a good thing. It means that your story is good...I guess I'm just freaky like that. But I want an update!!! I want to know what happens!

hehe. ^-^ if I had had a way to contact YamiYugi I would have given that person a peace of my own mind. People like that are just far to annoying. They just live to complain. And if they don't like the angst and abuse and all that other fun stuff. Then they should move their ass back over to FF.net

Anyway! Time to review the chapter! ^-^ awesome chapter. now that I'm not working 9 days strait again, and I have a few days off perhapses I can get some more of my own writing done. Poor Atemu! I just want to huggle him. Hope Yugi comes home soon! ^-^ Ja ne for now~

Okay, so against my better judgement because I know this is gonna be a dark fic and I hate angst... I still read the first chap. As long as you don't make me cry or bite my fingernails in suspense of what you're gonna be putting the chars through next, I think I'll keep reading... when you do make that happen I'm sooooo outta here *pouts*

Well, Yuugi's an idiot for running out like that. He needs to read the script; then he would've known Atemu loves him back XD but nooooo, Yuugi didn't read the script first. Now see what happens when you don't do that?! Tsk, bad main character! Bad! No cookies for you *nods*

All my craziness put aside though, good job on the first chap and although I'm sure I'll regret putting this down later when the fic goes angsty, update soon! Talk to you later.

Moony