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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES YOU WOULD MAKE ME CRY INTENTIONALY! *sulks* And see? I'm reviewing! And even before you manage to update again today! GO ME! Well, I have yet to cry thank god and i've gotten through the first three chapters so I guess I'm safe now? *shifty look* Right? RIGHT *no response* A LITTLE CONFIRMATION PEOPLE!
And where were you last week? You weren't on... I do hope nothing bad happened *frowns* well, I suppose I'll get to hear about that tomorrow if you come online then.
Anyway, like i said I havnét cried... but damnit, you put Atemu through Hell in this one. Poor guy. First Yuugi, now Gramps. Are you actually gonna kill the old guy off? Cuz that's just sad... really, really sad...
Well next chap should be updated today so it's really pointless to say 'update soon' ne? ^^; Yeah, I thought so too. Let's see how long I keep you waiting for the next review ne? XD Cya tomorrow!
Moony
And where were you last week? You weren't on... I do hope nothing bad happened *frowns* well, I suppose I'll get to hear about that tomorrow if you come online then.
Anyway, like i said I havnét cried... but damnit, you put Atemu through Hell in this one. Poor guy. First Yuugi, now Gramps. Are you actually gonna kill the old guy off? Cuz that's just sad... really, really sad...
Well next chap should be updated today so it's really pointless to say 'update soon' ne? ^^; Yeah, I thought so too. Let's see how long I keep you waiting for the next review ne? XD Cya tomorrow!
Moony
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Poor Yugi! T_T
Atemu's gonna kill somebody ^_^;
Love the story and can't wait for more ^_^
Atemu's gonna kill somebody ^_^;
Love the story and can't wait for more ^_^
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Bakura and mariku got brains! MIRACLES DO HAPPEN! Man, who would've ever thought they'd get this straight through their heads? Yes guys, Atemu is human is not responsible for what heppened at Kul Elna. Shocking isn't it? Now if you would've just gotten those brains a bit back or would've opened your damned eyes you might've seen this a bit earlier and it would've saved everyone heaps of trouble. Idiots.
Well, i still got another chap to go, but at least I'm TRYING to catch up even though I feel too damned lazy to actually read these long-ass chapters. Probably won't get the last one done tonight cuz it's already too late, but meh.
Anyway, great chap!
Moony
Well, i still got another chap to go, but at least I'm TRYING to catch up even though I feel too damned lazy to actually read these long-ass chapters. Probably won't get the last one done tonight cuz it's already too late, but meh.
Anyway, great chap!
Moony
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O Wow. This is angst the way it's meant to be written. I like the way things are moving: not too fast and not too slow. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I quite like the idea of not being told what's happening to Yugi, I think that when the time comes for him to try to Tell Yami what happened it will draw us in making it seem we are listening first hand...it's a great Idea.
It's a shame about grandpa but I hope he survives so he can help with the healing process because I have a feeling Yugi's going to need it.
Keep up the good work...maybe one day I'll have a go...nah I'll stick to yours...
It's a shame about grandpa but I hope he survives so he can help with the healing process because I have a feeling Yugi's going to need it.
Keep up the good work...maybe one day I'll have a go...nah I'll stick to yours...
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, how come I haven't seen this earlier? It's amazing! ^_^ But I want to know what's happening to Yugi. 0__0
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I got time to read Chapter Two and Three! -Reads your comment- Aw, I made you cry. I'm sorry! And you about made me cry! Poor Atemu, so much pain and loss. Great angst, great tension. They world can't be all butterflies and rainbows. 250...some days (sorry, forgot the actual number), gods that's rough! Poor Yugi, Poor Yugi, Poor Yugi! As much as I hate religious bashing, I really liked the scene of Atemu cursing the (G)gods. It just fits so well, so flawlessly. After all that's happened to him, even vicariously, it makes sense for him to lose his faith. I hope he gets it back. That hit close to home, no details given. Atemu wondering if the gods are cursing his choice to remain among the living by taking life for life, wow! Oddly enough, I had that same idea for a fic, but I don't know if I'll write it. I've got so many idea percolating I think I'm going to explode.
I forsee Grandpa dying, but who knows. You left it up to Fate and there's no guessing. A question, though. What the hell does 'locked in place' mean? I hope you persue that line, it's driving me up the wall! Thanks for saying 'an author of my caliber' that means a lot to me. Keep up the good work!
I forsee Grandpa dying, but who knows. You left it up to Fate and there's no guessing. A question, though. What the hell does 'locked in place' mean? I hope you persue that line, it's driving me up the wall! Thanks for saying 'an author of my caliber' that means a lot to me. Keep up the good work!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. Poor grandpa and Atem. I hope he will live and get better but probably not. It's just so sad. Atem is under so much tension and stress, I don't know what he will do. They need to find Yuugi. They are all falling apart without him.
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I could kick scream and throw a hissy fit saying you are far to evil for leaving the chapter the way you did. But I haven't updated it weeks....so I have no room to talk. I am far to lazy for my own good right now. Anyway! Awesome chapter~ keep them coming.
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far, an interesting take on things and as usual, you don't disappoint.