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I'm really enjoying your story so far! I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Kaze

....**growl** The bad guys get theres right? and yugi fought them at all turns right? please?
J-chan

first off, please forgive me for leaving a second review before a new chapter has come up. I have now read the other reviews for your fanfic, and would like to congratulate you for your elegant reply to yamiyugi's review. It's a nice change from ff.net, trust me.

Secondly I would like to wonder why yamiyugi is even on this site, seeing as they refuse to read the author's notes before the chapter. Seems a little strange to me. I also wonder how they presume to know exactly what is going to happen. Don't let them put you off.

Anyway, your story is well written, and I enjoy your writing style, both of you. That's the good thing about this website, no matter what kind of story you're reading, you can always be sure that it is brilliantly written. The reviews are usually politely worded too.

DEATH to the bastards that hurt my bishie! Death death death!!!! Give Atemu FULL reign of his shadow powers and release them on those bastards! There had better be some PAIN! I give Atemu full access to my well stocked torture room as well, just make sure he skins those bastards alive!

Bastards... I want to kill them

Well written story. Sad though.

In fact, it's so well written that for a while I genuinely believed they wouldn't find yugi. Despite the fact that the story pretty much revolves around him. >_<

Yes, I can review the story...no one said I couldnt...isnt tavi-san doing a wonderful job?....she took my idea and flew with it....everyone stand up and applaud tavi-san...catti

Awesome update...and people that sell people like that need to be shot...or have it done back to them.

Good chapter. Poor Yugi really suffered a lot. I wonder why Yami didn't hear him. I suppose the link was closed. I hope Yugi wakes up soon. He has a long recovery ahead of him. With love and understanding I hope he will recover.
I hope someone called Grandpa.

Great Yugi's back! Sweet the way you usually think of happiness for grandpa. And great on bringing back the shadows. Can't wait fore the next chapter.

WHOOT! Atemu has shadow powers! Now he can kick that bastard's ass when he finds him! OH YEAH! That guy is sooooo gonna go through ten times what he put Yuugi through before plainly losing his soul which will then be tortured for all eternity in the Shadow Realm! BOOYEAH! *grins evilly*

Though what they put Yuugi through... yeah, not so great to make it the understatement of the millennium ^^; Seriously dude, al those guys need to DIE. Painfully at that, with lots of torture and maiming involved if I have a say in the matter. Damnit how would they like it if they were put through something like something like this? Wanna bet they wouldn't be so thrilled anymore all of a sudden?! DIE YOU EVIL UNDEAD FREAKS! DIE!

*huffs* I'm gonna go think of some nice torture plans for these people that I can dream about. I'll have the best night ever XD Cya later!

Moony