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I asbolutely love the story so far. You've done a great job protraying Yugis distress as well as the others. I can't WAIT for the next chapter. Please hurry??? Much love! -Cyn

Hopefully not that scuzzy doctor, the shrink, the guy who tried to kill Yugi, the one who whored him out, anyone who raped or beat him, and the guys who caught him. They ALL should die slow, horrible, and absolutely excruciating deaths brought about in the most creative ways possible. (I have EXTENSIVE knowledge on the subject of torture should you need any help.)

And I'm so glad that Yugi is finally awake! I know he's kinda out of it, and doesn't remember anyone, and it's really really horrible and tragic that he's been broken and 'trained' so thoroughly, but this tiny little part of me is just on a repetitive SQUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEE! about Yugi thinking of Yami as his master! OOOH I LOVE that tiny little thought so much! It's my little silver lining through all of this until some serious punishment starts getting meted out in very large doses!

Have fun on your vacation.
I hope Yugi starts to remember his life from before and Atemu. At least he is no longer thinking he will be punished by him.
I think a lot of people are going to suffer and die before the end of this. Excellent work.

Yes! This has just made my day. I love this story so much. I hope Yugi remembers Yami soon. and the others, I guess. Can't wait for the next update!

Yes! This has just made my day. I love this story so much. I hope Yugi remembers Yami soon. and the others, I guess. Can't wait for the next update!

Love it Love it Love it!!! I'm so glad that yugi is aware now!

Oh this is good!! once again you didn't disappoint, I'm glad to see Yugi awake and realizing his new 'master' wouldn't hurt him (such a shame he doesn't realize it's Yami). As for the Dr? I'd have let Yami at him the son of a b****. I hope it gets better for Yugi soon and that the people responsible for this suffer, I can't wait!!!

I must just add that I like the way you introduced the other charaters, at least we know something about them...
Next chappy please ^______^ Oh yeah enjoy the vacation and have loads of fun....

Oh the anticipation... I can't wait for the next chapter.

It's really sad how Yugi's lost his memory, but it just adds to the story. And it makes perfect sense too.

As for that last guy who owned Yugi, I'd like to thank him for his carelessness - by putting him out of his misery at a reasonable (and painful) speed as opposed to VERY slowly (and excruciatingly).

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

::Whacks you with a stick:: >:-O Poor Yugi! Oh, my gosh, poor, poor Yugi! That's pretty bad. But I'm not angry, no, of course not. As horrible as the happenings are, the writing remains wonderful. Gods, I love your Atemu. When it comes to the thought of losing Yugi, he's so weak, so frightened, but when he sees that doctor and hears what he says, he's so fierce, so violent. I loved it! Nothing better than "his unholy eyes, his wild eyes". I love the imagery. Ohh, please have Atemu get his hands on every one of those evil bastards! (And let's not forget the other poor children!) I am confused as to why the hospital has one of these dicks, but I suppose your point is that they are everywhere. Great job! I wanted to cry with Yugi there when everything is in italics. I hope I misinterpreted it and he's not blaming Yami for not saving him. There was nothing more heartbreaking than him trying to imagine he was with Yami instead of that sick freak. Please, write more! It makes me sick, but I love it. Beautiful!

Great chapter. I hope Yuugi wakes up. I know he is still hurt but he might feel just a tiny bit better knowing that Yami, Bakura and Marik are going to punish those involved.
I was suspicious when that doctor wanted to be alone and not disturbed when he was with Yuugi. Most doctors want a nurse there to help them, they don't do anything alone. I'm glad yami got back in time.