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for Queen's Gambit

by WotanAnubis

person crab crusher
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was really good, though now i can't wonder what that song was. hope Paladins girlfriends Darkmagician girl,

btw i imagine them entering the area where the fiends like duel monster Goblin Zombie Grabbed her taking her to his lair to eat her when a female fiend type monster destroyed the creature and Alexis decides to repay her saviour.

with the fiend giving her back to paladin knowing that the queen would kill her if she keeps her waiting. you like?
person shikon striker
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray a Hibikime lemon, thank you it was very good.

i can't wait to see who's Alexis going to be do next.
person crazy peon
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE ALREADY THE SUSPENSE IS KILLIING ME! oh and for a idea, why not have Dark necrofear appear and create a bit of a panic by spreading a illusion tricking everyone before taking Alexis so she and her friend Shadow Tamer can have fun with her.
person king of seven
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool.
person Blaster screw-up
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thi is good, the 69 bit needs a small bit of work but otherwise not bad
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
69 bit needs a small bit of work

What kind of work?
person Blaster screw-up
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well you could possibly have Alexis find Freiya G-spot an tease it a little with her tongue but a bit difficult since it not with the fingers. you like?

btw Can Hibikime do her next?
person saixs
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really good there, a bit poor but still really good.
person shikon striker
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really good.
person crab crusher
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely simply lovely can paladin lover be Dark witch or Maiden of the Aqua?