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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is good, hm maybe thunder nyan nyan is next.
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty good the lemon was short but i thought it went well plus it had build-up.
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, crab crusher, I know you want a fiend chapter, but there aren't that many female fiends. There's Marie the Fallen One and... that's about it. I'm not sure I'd even count Dark Necrofear since it seems more like a mechanical sexless thing to me.
And crazy peon, yeah I know it was short. Length is one of my biggest failings. Sometimes the biggest. I do try to work on it, but sometimes (often) it just doesn't happen.
And crazy peon, yeah I know it was short. Length is one of my biggest failings. Sometimes the biggest. I do try to work on it, but sometimes (often) it just doesn't happen.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pretty good for i wish Alexis will have a lemon with at least one fiend woman.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pretty hot. THOUGH I THOUGHT THE LEMON WAS SHORT.
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it. awesome as always. looking forward to more.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddrkness
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddrkness
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter. I like this one, and I'm really want to find out what's going on, who brought here there. A great mix of plot and sex.
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice!
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far. The cards you chose for the first two chapters was good. Then you started to choose some not so great characters. Well, not like I can do much about it. THis is good. Well, Ja ne and keep up the good work
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hm, for the next chapter, how about alexis and paladin stopping at a area being held by a woman holding a woman and said woman want to teach alexis the pleasure of an orgy.