rate_review Reviews

I liked this story. However, what there is now is pretty short and I'm not sure the division into two chapters is at all justified, but that's a minor nitpick, really.

Anyways, it was fun, uncomplicated and unpretentious lesbian smut of the kind the Yu-Gi-Oh GX section seriously needs more of. You could (or perhaps should) try working on the length of your sex scenes, but considering I myself have loads of trouble with that I may not have the right to complain.

In any event, keep up the good work.