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for The Draconian Sapphire

by AxiaDrake

schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok Alen just officially rules the world right now, and The creep in the shadows needs to die a slow and very painful death. And Yay I get to go read another chapter now!
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOH Joh and that fiery temper, and Seto is hilarious and WAHOOOOO! The Morrighan was the one I was leaning towards the most! Awesome awesome awesome! more soon, more soon!
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffie at the end, I wonder what Boris is gonna imagine... that Joh is with a woman???

And I hope that we will see more about Seto and Jou. I kind of missed them^^'

Can not wait also to see the interaction between Boris and Seto. That will be interesting. Seto seems to be in good terms with Seth but will it be the case with Boris.

I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dies* That was SO hot. I love you! XD I am so going to have to save this chapter to my hard drive so that I will be able to read it whenever I want to, even if I have no internet access, and I am probably going to have dreams about this too. Hehe. *gives you major brownie points for this chappie* So...six kids in total? Holy crap. I only have one, who is now two months old, and I am already terrified of how things will be with multiple children. I can't wait to see what you have in store for all the little kidlets. Oh man, I hated the small cliffie at the end of this chappie. Bors and Joh just got to be together and now there's gonna be drama. Please tell me that Bors will let Joh explain and will believe him. I don't want them to be apart! That would just suck! *bounces in anticipation for the next chappie*

Over 70k words? My god, I don't think I would ever be able to write a fanfic that long. You have some major talent though. I am so glad you didn't end it when you thought to. I don't want to see this story end, unless there will be another one. I am so hooked on this series it's not funny. I find myself checking aff for fic updates a few times a day, and yours is the one I look forward to the most. I am so a fangirl of your fic! Let's hope I am the first! XD <3
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh so happy sexy! but poor Bor- I mean Chisato! don't let him think the wrong thing for long! And who's Joh's mother? you said popular and still worshiped today, so... Brigid? One of the Morrighan? Doesn't quite seem like Cerridwen... GAH! This is pathetic! I took Druid lessons for over 2 years! I should know this stuff!
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MEEP! gun shot **shivers** ok so just finished the first series and must glomp you! **glomp** love your writing......plus you put recipes in your work! so happy ^-^
J-chan
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe I loved this last chapter^^

Yay it's good to see Johfrit so happy. He finally has gotten his soulmate. Can't wait to know more about Boris and the way he is gonna treat Seto and Seth.
The last part was so funny; especially when Yugi remembered the day Joey jumped on Seto^^

Houh it was good to see Joey threatning Seto into castrating him if he thinks about getting divorced... it is really good to see a violent Joey^^

Yay! this story is really good.
Please update!
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tatiana,

I admit to quite a bit of confusion where all of Joey's "relations" are concerned, but the story is so interesting otherwise that I don't care! Also, I love the interaction between Seto/Joey and their other souls and Alen. It's a very nice "family" atmosphere and leads me to think that you either have several brothers of your own, several boys of your own or have spent quite a lot of time observing their interactions.

I eagerly await the next chapters!

'Ko
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GO JOH! That's it Bors you SHOW him who's boss! GO SPANKING the naughty Celt! Irish Asshat XD! God that's tooo funny! I LOVED this! finally finally FINALLY! I LOVE Johfrit SOOOO much! And wooohoo to being Wiccan! I'm Pagan myself, Strega if we HAVE to use a term. and it's about three days late, but Happy Ostara! And since today is Easter....Happy Christian adaptation of the spring equinox/ pagan fertility rite day!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*gets my fangirl moment out of the way* Seto in his Pharaoh outfit. *drool* Now that that's done...Yay for Joh and Bors! I am so happy that they are finally together! It's about damn time. XD Having Bors pounce on Joh with the Almighty around was hilarious! It got me laughing. Silly sex fiends. It would be awesome to see a Joh/Bors lemon, but that's just coming from my Joh obsession, lol. Though if you do one, I would die of happiness! Let's hope they have more successes when it comes to getting Seto's other souls back. *giggles* I still love picturing a female Seto. It would be awesome if one of the girls looked similar to him and Seth, cuz I am sure it would creep them out. Hehe. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Now, as for suggestions for making Seto more gentle and sensitive and stuff, that's a hard one. Personally, I think you have already done a lot on that path, and I can't really think of anything else. Though, Seto would get brownie points from Jou if he gave in to Jou's wanting to move into his father's house. Self-sacrifice is always a super sweet thing! Maybe if there is stuff Seto hasn't told Jou about, which would probably have to do with his past, I am sure that could work too. I know this isn't much, but I hope any of these suggestions help out even if it's only slightly. <3