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Hoho I loved how all the versions of Joey messed up with Mai's mind. It was funny to read^^

And poor Mai, she is gonna loose her mind with all this. I wonder what is her role in this story...if she is gonna stay or get back to where she came from.

I wonder what is gonna happen next.

Update!

I was laughing so hard this entire chapter! I hope you write the sequel soon, I wanna read it!

Great chapter^^
I liked what Jono told Joey. I mean it is really interesting. You really know a lot of things about ancient gods.

So next chapter is the last one?
I wonder how you are gonna end up the story
Can't wait to see what is gonna happen next

Update!

hmmm why do I get the feeling that it's Mokuba?... Ooooh don't keep us in suspense!

*rereads the chappie* I missed this story like crazy! I'm glad to see it updated again. *snugs Jono* I bet it was hard for him to admit it. Though the mind connection thing between Jou and Seth was original. I loved it. Hehe, baby talk! I can't wait until they actually have their babies. Update soon. :)

I forgot to mention that in my last review; I loved your reference to the Doma season^^ It is always good to see references to the show.

Ok then, waiting for your next update!

I just LOVE how this story is going on!!!!!

I loved the confrontation between Seto and Joh because Seto hurted Bors. Wow I never expected from Joh to appear so quickly and to threaten Seto. He is really ready to hurt Seto for Bors? And I wonder in case it is gonna happen, what will be Jou's reaction... This is so excited!!!! Can't wait to see more of the interaction between Bors-Seto-Joh and Jou. This is so interesting. Seto could be a badass sometimes but it is not me who is gonna complain^^...

As for Bors...haha it is so funny to see him all in awe at Seto's behavior. I mean specially when Seto is capable to make Joh obey him.

Can't wait for the next chapter

And sorry for my very late review^^' but I have been rather busy this last week

Can't wait for more^^

Ooo... I really really love this story. It's getting more intriguing by the chapter.

XD Poor Bors...i hope Johfrit isn'too hard on his poor uke XD

It's strange that one of Seto's other lives was only twelve...wow...

Go Hanna! I can't wait for the cerimonies!

Good job, and am eagerly looking forward to more chapters.

{ps, will you email me when you put up new chapters? It would help alot! Thanks!}

Love,
SvII

It's about time that Seto agreed to Jou's request to move in with his father. I can only guess at how this would make things more interesting. Alen totally fucking wins. XD I think I would rather try to mess with Seto than with him. Though, it would be fun to do it. I mean, messing with a god could be fun as long as you didn't push it too far, and they knew it was just playing around. It was hilarious seeing Joh bitch at him. I love his attitude. *totally in love with Joh* I loved how you have Bors acting all innocent, even though he's not completely innocent, especially when it comes to sexual appetites. Making him act like a woman was priceless. All I could picture for the rest of the night was a girly version of Seto being all innocent. Mind you my friends hated me going on about it, but hey, that's hat happens when you get a fangirl excited. These chappies were awesome!

Okay, confession time. I was kind of going through withdrawl when it cme to no new chappies being posted for a bit, so I admit that I went to the yahoo group and read chapters 10, 11, and 12 before you posted chapters 10 and 11 here. I won't say anything about chappie 12 in this review since I know others may read it, but I will say this: Seth and Jou's mindlink-like connection so had me wanting to see a Seth/Jou lemon. I'll save all other comments for that chappie when you post it here.

I remember when I played RO and my friends in the guild I was in wrote an RO fanfic. All the main people in the guild were in the story, and mind you, it was just for fun, but it was awesome to read. They made me the hyperactive fangirl who was obsessed with collecting headgear in the fic. Very entertaining to read. I'll be sure to check out your RO fic. I bet it's an awesome fic.