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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I love it when writers update fast! Heh yeah I love my name to. Whats sad is u appear to like it more then the people I know, Sigh..... Ok on to better things. There r one or 2 little typing glitches, but hey its normal. U should see 1 of my chapters if i dont have it betaed. One word.... scary. BUT as for the story itself, its great. I can so see little yugi being all pouty like after being dropped on his little bum, poor guy lol. I just went and read 2 or ur other stories and I must say u do appeared to have improved a good bit, so I wont say anything more on the word mix ups. and now.... just to stroke ur ego, you self admitted review whore, PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN!!!!!! (Happy now?O.o)
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hump... evil black mailer.... making me review 4 an update... Oh well I was planning on it any way. So far this story is great. I love hoe u set up the plot, and i love the chapter length, (I thought i would hate it after the first one) and I love how u make my fav little guys blush lol. All in all I cant wait for an an update.... So update soon!.... PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait ´till the hikaris meets the kings! please update soon! ^_^
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was mean to leave it there...I've done it before too. ;) Update again soon I want to see what happens.
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!! I loathe thee so.
Good chapter, over-all. Filled to the bring with actiony plotness.^^
Love it!!
Good chapter, over-all. Filled to the bring with actiony plotness.^^
Love it!!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh sound like those three are in some deep shit! Washed over board! Hopefully they'll meet their dark halves soon! I love how this is somewhat like my fav movie, but yet not like it! This is too cool!
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well good start, so far. And if you're willing to write it, then, I am willing to read it. Now I'm just gonna sit back and see where, or what, we sail into. Later.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Foreboding...gotta love it.^^
Yay for longer chapters!!
Yay for longer chapters!!
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ummm, sounds good. Has a lot of possibilities. Yeah, think I would like to see where you go with it. Please do continue, if you feel so inclined. Though, remember, you do have other stories started, don't over tax yourself. Good luck with it. Later!
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds interesting! I cant wait for the next chapter!!