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for Yami's and Hikari's

by YamiKitsune

schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! AN UPDATE!!!!! It feels like its been forever! Did u come down with a case of writers block or did life become a factor? lol. Yami and Yugi just keep getting cuter and cuter together. And can I point out just how funny the picture I have in my head of Malik jumping Bakura is??!!! LOL TO rich.... I love it. Well I hope ur not getting stuck anywhere in the plot. Go have a lemon (Yummy lemon) cookie and then get us out a new chapter! U love me, so u cant hate me 4 being demanding.... please remember that! lol.
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know the feeling took me three months to find a new job after I moved out of my parents house >.< sucks! so many bills! still looking?
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.....Ryou'a ganna catch a could....well I have one right now so we'll be cold buddies.
J-chaN
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more updates -yes- and im glad u like typing my name. Most people hate it because it's so long lol. And just a side note on the pain thing... well let me put it this way: Just as u r a review whore, i am an angst whore. as long as there is a happy ending! i love to see the little guys in tears- physical and emotional. And poor Ryou is still stuck in the tower??? Y?? I think u should have kept typing until he was out of his tower too. hump yes i am just trying to get a longer chapter out of u. So what? And for some reason im seeing the hikaris seeing each other and hugging and the yamis being very jealous and graby with the little ones. Sorry random mind going random places. And not having a story planned out is a good thing. It leaves the story open to anything, and u can do what ever u want with the story when ever u want. Now this review is going on way to long so let me say Love the story, UPDATE soon, the whole nine yards, u know lol. LaTer then!
person Shuman
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it Love it! Thanx very much for the update!!
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hope Ryou well get something to eat soon. This is a happy and sad chapter. Thank you for the update.
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I love updates! This story is moving along nicely! I kinda feel sad for poor little Mailk, and yet... I guess its just the sadists and masochist in me ,but I also love what happened. I know I'm sick and twisted, tell me something i dont know... But just cause I think good writers dont hear it enough: Ur Great. Go give urself a cookie! And then come back and update lol.
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where is the story for chapter five? I see the reviews but nothing after that and it makes me sad because the story was just getting good too.
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are they still in the cute cloths?
J-chan
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I noticed some spelling errors, but not too many. Keep up the good work.