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chapter 5 (chapter 4) Is missing for some reason D: -sobs- although I love the story but still I want the missing chapter Dx!!!! its like being taunted with delicious food yet not being able to eat it all.

Hi I'm really enjoying this story but I can't seem to access chapter 4. I'm not sure if it loaded properly when it was posted and I've tried refreshing the page and everything.

Thanks shadowrealm818

When are you going to update the next chapter!? thank you very much...

yeah an update!!!!!!! (i cant wait 2 c the fan art 4 this by the way) and yes uve slowed down with ur updating, but u r still updating which is more then i can say 4 some people on this site... myself included lol... life can b such a pain, stopping the creation or good yaoi... stupid life... lol...
Again poor malik gets the short end of the stick... and is it me or dose it feel like little ryou isnt getting enough camera time? and have i ever told u how much i hat chiffys?????? CAUSE I DO XP !!!! cliffys r teasing and teasing isnt nice lol. well u did update so u do get a cookie! and im glad to hear that ur already onto the next chapter. so same time tomorrow?... maybe same time next week?...... >.< ok, ok how about same time next month?.... pretty please with yaoi on top????

I really like this story. Sorry I didn't find it before. I hope Marik doesn't hurt Malik.

THAT WAS A BAD ENDING TO A CHAPTER. It was too sad of and ending as well. I liked the rest of the chapter. Keep going I want to know what happens next.

A very good chapter, I like the whole story so far.... Can't wait until the next chapter.... plz update soon, ne...!!! ^__^

Yay! Great story! I love how you give each pair their shared part in it. This is just... not too long or detailed but not too short and plain (hope it don't sound wrong). It's perfect! ^_^ And even Bakura's growing softer. I like that. He's always last and it takes so very long for him and Ryou but I'm hoping it will be different here, if just a little. Not that I would want to interfere with your plans... ^_~ Oh, and make Yugi and Yami really sweet together, make it a chase, a game. And keep Malik a bit afraid of Marik and have him struggle into the last. :D
Sorry, couldn't resist wishing. :P
Hope you update soon!

awesome fic :) loving it so far ^^ update update!!!

Thank you for the update. I love this chapter by the way. It is really starting to move a long now. I look forward to more of this story. I almost can't wait for Yugi and Yami, Bakura and Ryou, And Mailk and Marik to get together.