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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope Joey is okay and it is not a trick to get to the hikaris. I hope one of them figures out what is going on and soon.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Neat chapter. Ewwwwwwwwwwwww another cliffie, I like it though. Love the "hakari" discussion the yami's were having. The less Seto/Joey,the better (sorry, can't stand them). Else wise, great chapter over all. Glad you got over block, hope to see more soon. Great story so far!
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I clicked on this story on accident thinking it was something else. Boy was I amazed! This is really great. I like what you've done so far and am looking forward to reading more. If you still need a beta, I can always be convinced to do some grammar nazi work for you. *winks* Good story - please continue?!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yayeeee! A good, quick, update. What more could one ask for? C'ept more please. Great story. A pleasure to read.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I hope they find the rest of the items soon so the yamis can come back. I wonder who or what is trying to control the Shadow Realm. Possibly Zorc.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thankies for the quickie chapter. Glad your willing to continue, regardless of your beta situation. The chapter you wrote is really not that bad. I really only spotted one obvious error (typed since, when you meant sense) other than that it was a pretty well written chapter. Besides, if it's a good story, and is readable, most readers tend to overlook, typo, spelling, grammar, errors. Love your story so far. Continue...soon...please. Later!
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Ryou, I hope they can protect Yugi and Malik.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It's interesting.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that chapter. I do hope you will continue it, soon. So good luck in finding that beta that would allow this story to continue. So will the unsung 'hero' out there please step up, for this author. Later!
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is very cute..I'm assuming its a Hikari/Yami fic, if it is...Yay...love those *-*...oh I hope its also a Seto/Jou too....*big puppy eyes*