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by YamiKitsune

person tavia454
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chap!!!!! Are shadows born of nightmares?! At least that's the impression that I'm getting...This is such an awesome story. Poor Yugi - he's been through so much! All three of them have. *sobs* Hopefully the Yami's will make things better though
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What are Honda and Anzu up to? oy! I hope Yami puts a stop to them quickly!
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Poor Malik, I hope he isn't too badly hurt. The villains? One I think, is Aknudin, Seto's father from the past. The girl I have no clue unless it's Anzu. I think Aknudin could hace the power to take over Jou. Or else, it's Zorc himself. I hope the other items come back soon. having a possessed man in your life is not good.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The shadow is Zorc and Honda is the master. Anzu is the girl. Great chapter. I'm glad the Yamis are back.
person tavia454
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, you put another chapter up while I was hiding under my rock?! Too cool - and now the Yami's are back! Yay! Time to kick some ass.
person maggiemay
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...I have to disagree with Read_right_time. Bring on the Seto/Jou. Rofl. *My name is maggiemay and I am a puppyshipping addict* Okay, on to the review. Very interesting plot and good fun to read. I was bored at 4 am and ran across this. Thank you for the addiction fix. As to who the bad guys are. Hmmm...

I rule out Seto and Jou simply because Seto doesn't believe in magic crap and Jou is possessed so he's obviously unwilling. The bad guy is human, male and was with them throughout their adventures. Would be either Honda or Otogi. Mokuba wasn't really in their circle so I discount him. I vote Otogi because he is more apt to jealousy and covetousness. The girl - hmmm, Not Mai because Mai is distinctly a woman. That would leave Ribbon, (although not really in the series she is manga), Anzu, and Rebecca. Hmmm...I think I will rule out Rebecca because she is too smart to get involved with shadows. That leaves Anzu.

So my guesses as to who the bad guys are - Anzu and Otogi (Duke). Probably way way off but I thought I'd give it a try.

*cough* I KNOW this is gonna sound cliche or trite or something. But for the shadow to hide in Jou's heart...DUMB IDEA ON THE SHADOW MASTER'S PART.

Will be a bit cramped in there with all the love he has for Seto all bottled up. it is the ultimate puppyshipper in me that says that when that shadow tries to hurt someone and Seto is there and would get hurt too...well lets just say that the shadow is history. LOL...Sorry I have this running scene of the shadow being all psycho and dangerous, spouting off that he's in Jou's heart and Seto rolling his eyes. "Oh is that where you're hiding? As the owner, I am handing you your eviction notice." And with a chibi-eyed and charming look Seto kisses our blond bishi and the shadow sort of poofs...just a scream and *Puff of smoke* shadow gone ...and when the smoke clears Jou's wrapped around Seto playing tonsil hockey. *giggles* *My name is maggiemay and I am a Seto/Jou Addict*

Hey I'm dangerous at 4 am and bored.

Great story
Thank you.
Maggiemay
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Firstly, because it's here so quickly. Secondly, because it's just a great chapter. Your female villeins, has to be Anzu/Tea it usually is. Followed by Mia Valentine and Rebeca Hawkins. Male villeins Honda/Tristian, RexWevil, Bandit Kieth (usual suspects). Master could be Pegasus,Dartz,Sigfried(spelling)or Zork. Bah, as you can see, I could be very indecisive. So all I have to do, is wait(impatiently),to see what my author has comes up with (I trust it'll be terrific). Love that reunion scene. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! C ya.
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I want more please.......
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter. Love the closeness between the hikaris, and the Yamis. Honestly can't wait for the next chapter. Please post it soon. Keep up the great work.
person tavia454
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh! You so suck! That was totally evil! And...Oh please continue!!! Don't drop off the face of the earth like everyone else. Please?! Loved the scene with Bakura and Marik where they bump heads. *snickers* That was great! I'll email you so we can hook up. Later!

PS Hope you know I'm just kidding about the you suck comment. It was the only thing I could think of when you dropped out like that. ;)

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