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Yes, much better now...thank you...and bad shadow taking Jou away from Seto...bad shadow...

I so loved that chap! But I don't think it worked that time. Some of the errors are still there. *scratches head* Sorry! I'll do better next time. Until then, great chap!

I loved the chapter. I hope Malik will explain to everyone what is going on. Ryou needs to tell Bakura what his uncle did. Maybe he can let go of some of the pain and get rid of the shadow. Anzu is a bitch and I hope she gets what is coming to her. I hope I can keep up a little better.

I hope this will help Ryou to tell and to heal and get rid of his shadow. I hope Yugi tells his secret too. I understand about crazy work weeks. I am working 60 hours a week now. It's not easy.

Good chapter! I like where you're going with this. Hummm, wonder what "deep secrete" Yugi could have, strong enough to create a shadow. Guess I'm going to have to wait till next chapter to find. Later!

Good chapter. Not that sloppy, pretty clear. To bad the mutt was found, kinda hoping you'd loose him (well till later, or preferably till the end). Not that's gonna happen though, too many people like seeing Kiaba with a pet. Well, still a great story none the less. Can't wait for the next chapter. C ya.

Anzu eh? Okay sounds good. Honda? Hmmm...he's sort of a ball-less character to me. Don't think he'd have the cajone's to try to go against Atemu and the rest.

The shadow...hmmm...Did I speculate on that before? I dunno. But lets try this. Seto had a dark creature in his soul and Atemu banished it. Now, since the only critter that has come close to beating Yami, and who controlled a god card, is Seto, could it be Seto's dark shadow that got banished? Just a thought there. It would also explain how it could reside in Jou's heart. He tends to be a loyal pup.

That is one thought...

Another, well...Could the shadows be Born of Pain and Betrayal? Could the shadow actually be born of Yugi's loneliness and pain? Who better to defeat Atemu and the others then the shadowed parts of their lights? And if the pain MERGED (fused I think is the correct Duel Monster term for combined monsters) into one shadow IT would be a powerful critter.

Well those are my thoughts.

Maggiemay (not 4 am but still jonesing for Seto/Jou)

Hmmm so I wonder what pain caused the shadow. Yugi's from when Atemu left him? Or Yugi's from when ALL of his friends left him? Or perhaps...YAMI's from when he left Yugi? Oh now that would be intense...The Master of Shadows battling the His own Shadow.

*grins* Still no Seto/Jou smexin' but I have hopes for at least a smooch or two.

Maggiemay

Evil! I love it/ excellent I can't wait to read more

Yugi is so insecure. I can't believe his former friends are doing this to them. I still have no idea who is behind it. Unless it is Gozaburo but that really would be a weird thing.