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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! I made it back on to aff!!! Whoa, and I almost thought I wouldn't be able to find it, it's been so long since I've been on here! Lovely chap! Poor Yugi, he really got the shit end of the deal as far as parents go! And Yami needs to be more supportive! Poor kid, he's all screwed up!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh cliffie! Damn it! *sighs* I'm so impatient when it comes to reading, but I'll get over it. I just hope that the yami's will be able to rescue their lights before its too late!
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love a story of Yugi's and Ryou's past. I hope I can keep up. RL is a pain in the ass. Poor litte Yugi his mother sounds mentally ill. His father is an ass.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update...and I think once Yugi understands that what he did was in self defence he will be light again
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Yugi. I hope he will tell Yami and Yami can take away some of his pain. He didn't kill his mother on purpose, it was self defense. Grat work.
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay! Yup. I liked it. Your chapter, that is. It works/fits. Given what is, generally known, as Yugi's personality(his aversion to killing/death), I think the memory you created for him "perfect". The worst thing for Yugi is knowing he hurt someone, so remembering his part in his mothers death(even if it was accidental)would traumatize him enough to create a shadow. Well done. Okay, so now, I wanna know what happens next. Can Yami help, or make it worse? Can hardly wait for next chapter. Later.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm quite a good update...well done
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. A pleasure to read. Just waiting on the next chapter. Later.
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far...the last chapter #10 was a bit confusing...but meh...pretty good anyways
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. I don't know who I want to win in your struggle.