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for The Draconian Ruby

by AxiaDrake

schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story was cool now, with that last chapter, i'm not sure it's cool anymore. All that was way random.
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was hot!!!
I loved this chapter!
Actually I love how this story is evolving.
And you are gonna introduce Egyptian Gods... wow that's interesting. I'm really excited to see what is gonna happen.
And poor Jou^^'... Seto didn't make things easy for him but well Jou was excpecting that^^ but I loved also the short moments were Seto was trying to calm down a very disturbed Jou. He can be so sweet sometimes. So cute^^
Please update. This is a great story.
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!!!!!!!! you made me laugh and cry at the same time!!!! I really did cry!!! I can't believe it ,,
Are you for real?..........that was the most romantic and yet hilarious thing I've ever read.........I can't wait to read more.........Please update more......
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...can Joey come over and massage me too? ;) he can bring Seto along, I have no problem with that. XDD

But seriously, I love your story. Very erotic and damn those two, such tease ^_^

Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Kale1985
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please please please write more.......Joey is sooo evil.....Love it
person margyy
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really awesome fic so far :D Really looking forward to the next update!!
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW Hot from the beginning!
I liked very much this chapter.
I loved seeing Jou messing with Seto's head.
I wonder who will be the seme in your story (I hope it will be Jou^^ maybe not in the beginning but for later). The two have such strong heads.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Please update!