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for The Draconian Ruby

by AxiaDrake

schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really do like this story.
Seto and Jou are so hot together.
I REALLY want to know how they will be able to hold back their hormones during 2 weeks. They are gonna be crazy with need at the end of these 2 weeks. That would be fun to see^^
Can't wait to see what is gonna happen.
Please update!
person Sayuri
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still a huge fan of this fic. They're so hot, and I love the thing about the pheromones. I laughed at the characters' expressions in the previous chapter when they ate the cake and were told what it was.The sexual scenes are hot and I can't wait for the real lemon ^^ I also thought it was interesting how you made Seto's hair curly. Seto and Jou seemed to be a little harsh but I guess I do understand their reasoning.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapters, keep up the good work ^^
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. update soon!
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha this chapter was so fun^^ I liked it very much.
I do really like how you describe Joey and Seto. They are so hot together. I wonder how they are gonna manage to deal with the two next weeks without jumping one each other.
Please update! I wanna know what is gonna happen. And I'm really curious to see who excactly is Jono.
person Lici
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, Seto the woman...*snicker*
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really very hot in every way^^
I like the plot... very interesting and touching.
I love how this story is going on and the idea of the 4 other spirits of Joey is really good.
I like how things are evolving and I don't think that the events are fast because Joey has been prepared for that thousand of years ago so everything is predicted.
Please update!
person Shiauko
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now, I am not quite sure if my last review was the chapter previous, or two. But I will assume it is two. The last two chapters were gorgeous, Hanna is a well developed OC, and I really feel her love for Joey. And the cliff! Oh! I fear the cliff! I am teetering off the edge! I really want to find out more about what happens next. I have your story fav'd and I check it as often as I can.

And I loved that part X9~ when they all took a bite of the cake, and then Seto explained it away! That was funny! I could just picture Duke king of gagging when he was told. And stunned Tristain over there probably wouldn't get it! I hate that they make him seem smarter than Joey in the anime D: *cries*

Oh, and BTW, I love you. And now I will explain why. You are offically THE best fanfic writer in the world. I have read fanfics where the main girl is kicked out of the story with no explanation as to why, or when someone kills her off at random. Sure, we all ahte them, but the fangirls just do it to put their OC with their main man. But you were awesome. You did it just to get the girl outta the way of the yaoi. And with justifible actions! Poifect.

Ok, I am done rambling now DX . . . write moar! ~ Sooo, how many chapters you planning?
person Shiauko
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. It has WONDERFUL diction and detail. I love it! The atmosphere is wonderfully delicate, perfectly balanced, and researched well, I must say! You certainly know your stuff, or if you don't, you bluff pretty damn well! Perfect 10!

Is it too much to call it an epic masterpiece? I LOVE Joey. He always has been, and always will be my favourite anime character ever. I mean EVER. And I watch a LOT of anime. You name it, I probably saw it. And this story just made me love Joey so much more! You described him so very hotly. I love you for that! So very much. Very very much. *hugs*

And YAY! You scarred Mokuba for life!! I always knew he would be exposed to sex when he walked in on something dirty Seto was doing! YES! EPIC!
person Sayuri
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this fic, and it's an interesting take. I like how you've got all the Jou reincarnations in his Soul Room, and I liked the story you gave to each. But I was wondering why Seto wouldn't even be born by the time they turned 20? That's a big age gap O.o;; I wanna see it get to Seto trying to win Jou over, I think it's gonna be uber cute and sweet ^___^ (I'm a total sap that adores good WAFF). Good way to end the chapter too XD Good ole Mokuba, wrong place, wrong time. Only thing is I don't always like Jou/Seto, but depends on how it's written.

I'm really interested in the way this fic will continue, and I hope you'll keep going even if you don't get a lot of reviews because I admit I'm not a big reviewer. If you stopped I'd be quite sad =( Anyway, can't wait until your next update! =D
person imperial13
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice. pray continue