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for The Draconian Ruby

by AxiaDrake

schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sequel? YAY! I can't wait! *bounces excitedly*
person Sayuri
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay cookies!!! That was a wonderful chapter, loved the long lemon with the spirits, and whoo, the spirits are in the real world. It was all around very cute and sweet. I'm so glad that you're making a sequel!!! I'm interested in what the plot's gonna be. Can't wait to read it, and you can bet I'll be back reviewing and stuffs! Great job with this fic though, I really loved it. Oh, and I did notice the reference to those plants that Jou wanted, so I guess his desire for them was instinctual?

<3 <3

S_R
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES YES YES! FINALLY!!!!!!! SQUEE! I know who he is I know I know! but I'm not saying a WORD! I don't wanna spoil it for anyoone who doesn't! SQUEE! thankies for the updates! I love this story and I can't wait for the next chappie and the sequel!
person Sayuri
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the consumation. Very cute and I liked the scene when the dragons appeared.

I thought I knew who Alen was but now I'm not so sure. The best guess I've got is that he's Apollo since his name is literally A. Polo, and since you said he's a Grecian duelist and Apollo is a Greek god if I recall correctly. From what I read in your last chapter I have a feeling that Jono was his son since you said something about someone killing his son and putting a curse on his soul, and since he looks like Jou from what you seem to have hinted at/described. Bah I dunno, so many clues leading to different place =P

Anyway, I can't wait to read the end of this fic since it was so good, and as I said before, I hope you'll consider writing a continuation of this fic, but not sure where you'd go with it.
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*eats all the cookies since i know who alen is*
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!

And by the way, beautiful chapter. Very touching and sweet. Finally Seto and Jou got married^^


person Sayuri
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. As I've previously said, I love this fic, and yay they're finally married. My suspicions of Alen's true identity are getting stronger and I'm interested in finding out if I'm right. But yes, it was very cute, I wedding scene was sweet, and lolz at the guests' reaction to Joey's pheromones. I can't wait for the lemon and the ending of the fic, but it will be a bit sad to come to the end of the story. Are you thinking of making a continuation story or leaving it? Either way, awesome job and keep it going! ^__^
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, next chapter is the last one? I'm gonna really miss this story.

Anyway, I'm really excited for the wedding day as well as our two hot love birds^^. I want to know what is gonna happen! And who is this Alen?? why does he look like Jou? who is actually Jono??? what does this curse excactly involve? and by the way, why there is a curse?

Wow I'm sure that next chapter will be great!!!! These is so much questions that need to be answered. And that's without forgetting the wedding night^^. Can't wait for your next update. Don't make us wait for too long!!!
person Sayuri
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter, well done. I like the new OC and I kinda have my own suspicions of his true identity. Wondering about the importance of the plants that Jou wants since I have a strong feeling that you mentioned them in particular for a reason.

I'm semi-patiently waiting for the next chapters coming out since I can't wait for the wedding and all that follows (including a hot lemon hopefully ^__^).
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh...wow...I am in complete love with this story. I have to admit that I was a bit iffy when I first came across it with its description but way to go in completely turning me around!!! You are doing an absolutely amazing job in setting the mood and keeping touch with the characters, keeping them complete and not floating away from the picture, yay!!! I love your story most of all because its different, something I havent seen anybody attempt yet which makes it all the more wonderful. Though I do have a question, is the juice that Joey makes an actual thing that a person can drink? I'm kinda tempted to try making it but I'm not sure if I do for fear of it being completely horrible... ><;;; Anyways, congrats on your wonderful story so far! I look forward to the next chapters.