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for The Bet

by Oni

schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! i just read thye first chapter and i'm solf drat you! i'm to much a fan girl as is>.<
J-chan
person matu
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh,god.I've been waiting sooooooo long for next update in fanfic.net. By the way I glad to see you again!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one awsome story!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well alleluia! This has been sitting,unfinished, in fav. list forever. Can't even remember why I liked it so much,at the time. Though, I recognized it, three to four words into the summery. Went to check on it at FF.Net and it has 700 and some odd reviews. Well I was ecstatic, to see that it may be, eventfully, completed. Now, I'm going to read it again, for the umpteenths time. Hoping to find it complete. Don't disappoint. Great story, I do recall.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay so you posted it here. And I read it here. I still haven't read your promised lemons. And there's no new chapter. You could a least have added CHAPTER 21. Please continue it. Thank you. And if there are readers, who like me, sometimes, chooses a story to read by skimming the reviews first, Consider reading and reviewing this one there's 20 twenty pretty awesome chapters. Then maybe t witty author may add more chapters. I'd really like to see this completed. THANKS

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