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for Not That He Would Anyway

by Jadelioness

schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
U should write more...PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Rosebud
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Great story. Even though I’m not really a Ryou x Pegasus fan, I liked it a lot. I’m glad that at the end, Ryou learned of Bakura’s true feelings. Its sad how often we just heedlessly assume things about other people; when in fact, what we believed to be the truth was actually far from it.


Anyway, great fic. ^^
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou all he wanted was for Bakura to notice him and when he didn't he went to places where others would even if it meant that he had to service those men. I want Pegasus strung up and flogged for what he did to Ryou. The ending made me cry because when Bakura found out what Ryou did he wasn't angry and he wanted him not to do that ever again.. Great Story.....