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for A Step Further

by DarkTemptations

person smalvina
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why did you stop?
I want more ;)
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fun^^

I loved the last sentence and I enjoyed reading the phonecall between our two hot boys^^.

It will be good if you can continue this oneshot and make it a small story...
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I think the notes were mutual foreplay. Very funny and cute.