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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was a sweet ending! All I have to say is...omg...seven kids. I have one and she's a handful so I can't imagine what seven would be like. I know where you got the names!! I love Gravitation! *pets Yuki* I loved the image of a pregnant Atem/Yami. Great job on the story!
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I was going to like this story, but after reading all the chapters, I am hooked. I hope Ryou and Seto can work things out. I did giggle when I saw the name you decided upon if Ryou has a boy. YGO 5D's! lol I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome story i can't wait for the next chapter.^_^
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good...the last chapter was very sad, but well written.
I did notice that you had some spelling mistakes though. It might be a good idea to read it through a few times before posting. Most of it was just little things, like you were trying to spell 'cockier' but you spelled it as 'cocker', which is something that the spell checker would not catch, as that is a word as well.
I did notice that you had some spelling mistakes though. It might be a good idea to read it through a few times before posting. Most of it was just little things, like you were trying to spell 'cockier' but you spelled it as 'cocker', which is something that the spell checker would not catch, as that is a word as well.
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto, I really hope they get their child. Just when life seemed to get better for him and Mokuba, he gets sick and dies. Life is so unfair. Great chapter.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou. I hope his dream comes true.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope he can make his and Seto's dreams come true.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope they can make it to the ocncert and see Akifa. It is obvious that they miss each other a lot. I'm glad Jou is doing well with Bakura.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope he doesn't have to endure another death.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's so cute.