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Nice little story. I think that you use the word 'pussy' too much and some times I forget you are talking about males. Anyway nice job.

Glad to see the whisperers' perspectives. Hope to see the next chapter soon

I swear this story just keeps getting better and better! It was really neat of you to reveal everyone's partners in that way. Made it exciting and eventful. Thanks for updating so often!

Ah! Ah! You LEFT IT! You. Left. It! Oh, NOES! I am to be deprived of an ending!
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I think I love you. MUST keep being nosy must read the rest of your stuff!

*tackles you* YOU UPDATED! THANK THE GODS... YOU'RE SAVED! j/k -lol-

*nuzzles* I'm very happy you decided to update. I really wanted to know what would happen next. I'm glad you included more on Yami and the rest, and even more that you'll be giving us a view of everyone's experiences. I can't wait to read more and hopefully you'll update sooner. It was a great chapter and the story is coming along great! Keep up the good work.

Wow, very well written. Cannot wait for more :)

Ah I am enjoying this fic immensely. So glad I took a break from writing and decided to read. But now enquiring minds, mine anyway, want to know a few things.

Okay so why can't they get preggers more than once? If only the females were made sterile then the boi's should be as fertile as any other boi...or so I'd think. And if the species MUST breed, why don't they live together openly to lessen the fear?

If the Whisperers are anonymous...and immortal, how do they know they are not mating with their own fathers/grandfathers etc?

Genetically speaking, if you mate a half-whisperer/human with a full or even dominant whisperer/human...couldn't you get a full blooded whisperer or human?

If the whisperers are immortal how can their population be in danger of extinction?

That is a few of the questions that spring to mind.

Thank you for sharing your story.
Maggiemay

GAH! That was such a great chapter! Very nice. *evil grin*

Poor Joey, he wants to like Seto, but he can't. T_T Hopefully though, Seto won't be able to stay away from the sexy Joey and comes back to see him. Or maybe the two will elope! -lol-

I wanna know what happens to Yugi and the rest! Are you going to write about them, or is this mainly Joey? Either way, this is a good story and you should update again soon!

Wonderful job at putting lots of emotions into this chapter! Hopefully the other boys' experiences will be narrated as well. You're being fantastic with all this updating! -spazzes-

Nice chapter. Will you be writing about the other's encounters with theie Whisperers?