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for Whispers in the Dark

by BlackGargie

person Korbin
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sweet joy! There's the happy ending I was hoping for! Ah! Such a beautiful story and you did very well with it, very well indeed. I look forward to reading more of your work if you decided on posting more. Thank you for sharing such a lovely tale with us. ^_^
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah! You left it like that...grrrrr
person Ivy
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness only one chapter left? -wriggles in excitement- This chapter was by far the best you've done! Joey's labor and Yugi's breakdown were especially touching.
person kinkou
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* That was evil to do... right at the heart-rending part. Man I can't wait for the epilogue. This story was very well done. Congrats ^_~
person HannaFO
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo.. very mean way to end it.. and here i spent almost 6 hours reading the entire story in one sitting :D please update soon!!!
person tenshisuki (suki)
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg! T.T *teary eyes and sobbing* Joey poor joey! He should come back because his beloved blue eyes is being torn appart inside as well. ;.;
Anyhow so besides my sympathy for joey and seto I'd like to congradualate you for such a wonderful, well done story! I can honestly say that I know of only one other author that has ever made a Joey x Seto fanfiction that was so well done that I was captivated throughout the whole thing and couldn't bare to put it down I was so into the plot and parings. I'm hoping that you are intending to up date this story asap because, like many of the other yaoi fans and joeyxseto fans out there bound to love this story, I will be waiting impatently for the next update of this impossibly good fanfiction.
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sniffle...my poor Joey...
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My poor Joey...sniffle.....

And GO GO SETO!!!
person maggiemay
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, have I reviewed this yet? I am not sure although I certainly should have. Hmmm...I absolutely enjoy this - I have to admit last chapter I was very disappointed. The "Jou gets raped" story is so cliche it makes me cringe. It was only through trust in your previous chapters that I even opened this one, but having read this chapter I humbly apologize for my doubts. *squeals* You are using that ugliness as a vehicle to introduce a ritual that will let them be together - ha! It will probably be used to save the babies and Jou's lives. Oh you are so DANG GOOD. Glomps and thank you so much for the wonderful read.

*waits impatiently for more*

Maggiemay
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sniffle...ya raped my Joey!!

Sniffle..