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Poor Bakura. No one has ever shown him kindness before. That is so sad. Atem is really feeling guilty about what happened. Good chapter.

The part where Bakura is considering how to properly climb out the window amused me. I'm glad he decided to stay instead of falling to his death from a window, a dead Bakura is no good to the fanfic.

Maaah. Atem is so good to Bakura, I love it. xD

I feel bad for Bakura, he's had such a sucky life. I'm sure it can only get more complicated, although likely less traumatizing, from here on out, but at least he gets a nice soft bed for his troubles. I can only imagine how Bakura is going to act when he finds out who Atem REALLY is. Mwaha. :D I'm getting more and more excited for chapters to come out with each one.

Good chapter. I hope Bakura finds out it was Akhenden and not Atem before he kills the wrong innocent person. Atem must be feeling really guilty about what happened to Bakura. He seems to really care.

Bakura's gonna be in quite the bind when he realizes just who Atem is... OOOOh I can't WAIT for the next chapter, PLEASE update soon!

Oh gods, poor Bakura! That had better be the Pharaoh or Bakura is in BIG trouble! Atemu if my angsty bishie loses his hands I'll never forgive you for it!

I'm glad Atemu was in time. I hope he saves him. Good chapter.

The Pharaoh to the rescue. I don't imagine Bakura will appreciate that when he finds out. *-* Can't wait for more chapters, I really wanna get into their interaction~.

Poor Bakura caught as he was trying to do the right thing. I hope the man gets the amulet or the money for it. He really needs it. Good chapter.

Oh dear, Bakura has a conscience! He he he! That's so cute! Ah the things that Pharaoh's eyes can make you do eh Bakura? This was a really great start, I look forward to reading more!

*__* I like it thus far. I can't wait until the next chapter, I hope it really starts delving into the storyline soon.