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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! wonderful! go steamy hot lemons! please update again soon before I go mad! Bakura is gonna be PIIIIIIIISSSED when he finds out who Atem is.
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Bakura is going to be shocked when he finds out whp Ate, really is. Great job.
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, but is this ch. 5 or 6? If it's really ch. 5, then I feel like something is missing. It's just going from them being cute and awkward to each other to suddenly making out! But, it's a good chapter nevertheless.
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please!!!^-^
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The end of Chapter 2 had me gasping in horror and clicking like mad for the next chapter to see how things were panning out and then we're left with chapter four and pinning for chapter five. It's a thoroughly enjoyable story line and rather interesting and it will continue, won't it? Please? So we can see how things pan out for the thief and the pharoah?
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I wonder when Bakura will learn the truth, and what his reaction will be? Keep it up.
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...i can't wait to see what happens next! Everything is so well written..and the plotline really is interesting...though i'm just wondering how Bakura is going to react when he finds out who the pharaoh is.. Please continue to update...this is one of the best stories i have ever read! I'm looking forward to your next update. Take care 8D
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, i really like this so far..the plot is reallly good.. 8D thats why im going to go read more...
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWW! This was such a cute chapter! And Bakura will have a conniption if he finds out who he thanked. this is a great story please continue soon!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Should log in to review...too lazy...
Poor Atem feels so guilty. D: I'm glad Bakura didn't go complete and total ass hole on Atem and rub in the guilt trip, Atem really didn't need that. It's nice to see Bakura thankful for what's going on, especially since he's never had anything to be thankful for before now.
;__; Poor Bakura, I feel worse for him by the chapter. At least he has Atem to take care of him~. Can't wait for more. *__*
Poor Atem feels so guilty. D: I'm glad Bakura didn't go complete and total ass hole on Atem and rub in the guilt trip, Atem really didn't need that. It's nice to see Bakura thankful for what's going on, especially since he's never had anything to be thankful for before now.
;__; Poor Bakura, I feel worse for him by the chapter. At least he has Atem to take care of him~. Can't wait for more. *__*