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Wow, chapter three was really interesting. I liked that Bakura didn’t recognize the Pharaoh—though I anticipate his reaction when he realizes the truth.

Aww~ I really enjoyed this chapter. The tender moment between Atem and Bakura was very heartfelt. I also thought that it was cute how defensive Bakura got. I’m hoping for a lemon here in the near future *crosses fingers* XD.

These two are so awesome together. There really needs to be more fic’s out there with them as a couple. This ones so nicely written too; it’s a real treat! ^^

Oh, I loved, loved this chapter. Things are heating up between the two of them! Bakura’s awkwardness is simple adorable. I like that he has all those conflicting thoughts; even if he doesn’t let them show. And you do so well to draw the plot out. Often people drag on the content, or have them get together prematurely. But you move at a really nice pace. ^^

Wow, damn! That was hot! I really loved that lemon. I wonder what the aftermath is going to be; especially when Bakura finds out the truth behind who he just slept with. To be honest, I was sort of expecting for someone to come rushing in there because of all the noise they were making--haha, but that would have ruined the tender moment at the end, so I'm gald that it didn't happen like that. ^^

Anyway, this story totally rocks and I hope that you can update it again soon!

BTW, sorry I'm not logged in, for some reason, it won't let me review that way... ^^;

Well, this seemed interesting from the start and i'm really impressed by your writing stile. It's good to find a well-written fic amongst the pr0n from time to time :)). I'll be checking for a new update from time to time, cause you got me intrigued.

I loved it. Great chapter and hott!

SO DAMN SEXY!
Is there more

Aww, that was sweet :)

Good chapter. I hope they stay together even after Bakura finds out who Atem is. I love it.

OH MY GOD..........This story is lovely...It's a real beauty.......and what will happen when Bakura finds out who his lover really is?.......PLZ don't let it be a sad ending ......and update fast