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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so far this is my favorite chapter! Poor Seth, that'll teach him not to knock! ooooh I can't wait for the next one!
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Bakura is falling in love. Even his thoughts of revenge are leaving him. He just wants to go settle down. He is afraid to face his punishment at the hands of the Pharaoh, even though, it might be his chance to take his revenge. He is starting to care about himself more.
If he faces the Pharaoh, for his punishment, and finds out Atem is the Pharaoh will he still try to kill him or will he forget about revenge and stay at the palace to be with him.
Great chapter.
If he faces the Pharaoh, for his punishment, and finds out Atem is the Pharaoh will he still try to kill him or will he forget about revenge and stay at the palace to be with him.
Great chapter.
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. All of Bakura's trust in Atem scares me in regards to Atem's true identity. That's gonna be so hard for the both of them. T-T
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is great! I'm dying to know what is going to happen when Bakura tells Atem the truth and he finds out who Atem is. I love this pairing and your plot line is great. Please continue, and can't wait for more.
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oH, I loved this chapter. The part where Seth walked in was a nice touch and the lemon was very hot! XD Poor Bakura, he has no clue what he's gotten himself into. I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out where you'll be taking this. Hope you update soon. ^^
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, this is going to be interesting when he explains his reasoning to Bakura. I'd like to see Atem's reaction if/when Bakura tells him that his mission in life is to kill the pharaoh!
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you are an amazing writer! I'm so glad you updated, I've been waiting for this chapter for weeks...lol. Anyways, great job, and keep up the good work, I'm looking forwrad to your next chapter. Take care. 8D
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never thought I would be glad that I didn't follow story updates so closely the last few days, but at least I didn't read the lemon scene too soon. *__* Yay for the lemon! Atem is so caring, worrying about Bakura's wounds right after the smex. And Bakura's stubborn, of course, but it's better to just lay there. :D God, Bakura's gonna be maaaaaad when he finds out who Atem is.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so I just got through reading the first chapter and I have to say; I’m glad that I clicked on this story. It really is a delight. I love your style, the plot is intriguing and the characters are well developed—overall, I’m hooked. XD Wonderful job, you really are talented.
Hehe, well I’m off to go read the second chapter; I’d just thought I’d share my admiration for you work! ^^
Hehe, well I’m off to go read the second chapter; I’d just thought I’d share my admiration for you work! ^^
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, such suspense in this chapter. Poor Bakura; they put him through hell. I really hope that it was Atem that was standing there at the door.