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for Pharaoh and the Thief

by Jadelioness

person rukia
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Bakura......Please don't let it be a sad ending..I feel sorry for him
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope Atem will forgive him. He deserves no less. He prevented Atem's murder. He desreves so much more.
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh SHIT! Don't leave off there! OMG! Now I can't wait for next week! You know, I'm so glad Bakura got his revenge, it was a pleasure to read that bit, but I'm sadistically psychotic by nature, so that's ok. And you know, if that's what he came up with on the spot, I'm getting shivers thinking about what he could have done with more time and a room full of torture devices, it could have lasted weeks... Oh Bakura, I love you so...

I can't wait for updates! I'm on the edge of my seat! Will Atemu forgive him, if he finds out he was responsible for his poisoning as well as Bakura's village? He may realize that no matter what he MAY have done to Ankuadin, he would have to provide protection for him for the rest of his life to protect him from Bakura, and even that probably wouldn't have worked, as we've seen how effective the guards were already. ooooh I wish it was next week already! thank you for the update!
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Atem can forgive him. Akhneden got what he deserved maybe not enough torture but he deserved it. Bakura ended a threat to Atem's life and years of suffering for all of Egypt.
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow gruesome, but very cool chapter
person natzu
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it, hoping for a next chapter soon.
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now if they had just shown that in the episode, some feeling of justice might have been appeased in the minds of the viewers.

Very well done and I look forward to your next chapter.
person ayachan
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha, and now that butt dies!!!!!
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Akhneden must be running scared now. He is deparate to try and murder the Pharaoh and put Bakura in prison. That way he can put Seth on the throne and distract him from trying to find out what happened to Kul Elna. He would be too busy. He thinks he can rule from behind his son. I guess, he hasn't quite figured out that Seth will not allow him to conmtrol him.
So many thoughts ran through my brain while reading this. Of course, assassinate the Pharaoh and blame his lover and gain power. Too bad he figured that wrong.
Wonderful chapter.
person ethereal
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, that was a sweet chapter. I'm so glade Atem is alright. Can't wait for them to go out and get that bastard. He he he ^_^ Can't wait for more!

Ethereal