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for Pharaoh and the Thief

by Jadelioness

person amanda1
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww nice ending. I love how the old guy got off-ed. It was a good story
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ho-lee crap!

This story had me giggling like a school girl one moment, and sobbing my head off, the next.


WOW! It's been.....

I don't think a fanfic's ever caused that to happen, before


wow...

just just


wow!
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad they still get to be toghether even if it is not always or often. Great end.
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok that ending was GORGEOUS! I loved this entire story from beginning to end, absolutely wonderful. I hope you write more lovelies soon, I can't wait to read them too!
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great ending. I'm glad they get to be together even if it isn't all the time.
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Been waiting for this one for awhile. It was a kind of bittersweet ending, though I'm glad that they still managed to be together. That was important. And I'm really glad that Bakura didn't end up being executed, because that just would have sucked for Atem. Anyway, though. This was a very good story. I liked it a lot.
person  
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The Bakura-killing-preist part in chapter fifteen? Nothing I read ever made me happier. That was magical. I kept thinking that he was going to be caught and he wasn't, and he died so horribly and this makes me really happy. I was cheering Bakura on because it was so...beautiful.

And cliffhanger. Beautiful beautiful cliffhanger. I love this story.
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for them. I hope Atem and Bakura make the right choice. I know I don't count but I think Bakura did the right thing. He really did save Atem Good chapter. Have fun at home.
person Kino
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! It's my favorite story about Atem And Thief King Bakura.